Somit's Revised Application.

[Somit 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Somit

-How old are you?: 15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT +/-0

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Considering I am only a teenager I would say I have a higher than average grasp of grammar skills than some of my, less than average, internet counterparts of the same age.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I normally play Minecraft and/or video games in general after about 7 or 8pm GMT until 11pm GMT every weekday and on the weekends I can be on from 8 or 9pm until the early ours of the morning.

-How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft for about 5 to 6 months now.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: I used to do quite a bit of RP'ing and forum RP'ing back in the days of when Runescape was cool so I would say I have a fair bit more than the basics of roleplaying down to a tee.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: A world full of intelligent people with rich character backgrounds who will interact realistically for their character.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Just one with my friends from school a while ago, we stopped because the person who was hosting our server was charging to much for it.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Orcs, Humans, Dwarves. But there are other secret societies that can't be applied for.

-How did you hear about us?: Reckreations from youtube did a tour.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Somit

In-Character:

-Character Name: Grimbeard

-What is your Race?: Dwarf

-Biography: Growing up in the Cloud Temple of Aegis I felt empty and for many years I yearned to be with my people. I finally got my wish however, aged 12 and armed only with a pickaxe and a loaf of bread I left the Temple in search of the Dwarven city of Kal’Urguan. The journey took many months as I travelled south-westerly in search of my true home, I travelled over mountains, oceans, rivers and through forests until finally I found Kal’Urguan. Nowadays I spend my time venturing through the various tunnels and caverns around the town searching for a hidden chest said to contain untold amounts of gold and diamonds! During my search I have found many treasures already and have accumulated a small fortune but for me this is not enough!

-Character Age: 47

-Character Appearance: Being a dwarf I have naturally ginger hair and beard, I also sport a blue hat and some other apparel.

-Character Personality: I would like to consider myself as a serious fellow but as a Dwarf I am sure that I cannot. I am a hardened, determined Dwarf whose only weakness is a frothy Dwarven stout! I can stay concentrated for many days on end and never tire of doing repetitive things such as mining or exploring.

-Your ambitions: I have many ambitions in life. My main ambition is to found the secret treasure of Kal’Urguan for which I have longed after for many years now but I have vowed to find it before my death. Other dreams I have are to build one of the grandest houses in Kal’Urguan and also to become an ambassador for the Dwarven people.

-Can your character read or write?: Well enough for a dwarf.

-Can your character mine?: Very well. Being a dwarf mining comes as easily and walking!

-Are you a capable builder?: I am a competent builder but would prefer to leave that to other people while I proceed to mine.

-Can you wield a sword?: I need not a sword, I wield a pickaxe as well in battle as the bravest knight.

-Enjoy Farming?: Not at all, farming is for humans. Us dwarfs know only of rock and not of dirt and grass.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Being a dwarf I have extreme capability with a pickaxe. Not really any other skills in particular though.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://www.minershoes.com/skin/view/i4e ... 3013930171

-Other Information: This server looks amazing! I really want to join it and it would be an honour if you let me join. Could I get feedback if I am not accepted so I can possibly improve and earn the right to join?

[Slayer15855 3]

Denied.

You need an extensive and intricate character, so if you can extend your character biography, adding more depth and interesting bits so it is not just generic and boring. Make it fun and interesting! Then develop your ambitions and personality more to suit a deep and intricate character. Just make it interesting.