[Denied]Application #3

[TNTcreeper 7]

 Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - TNTcreeper25
How old are you?: - 13
What time-zone do you live in?: - Central Standard Time. (I think?)


Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - I don't think so..
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Maybe, although, I wouldn't remember.
Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - Yes, this is my 3rd application. 
My other applications can be found on my profile.

How did you hear about us?: - I was browsing the internet, and found this server.
What do you think the server will be like? - I bet it'll be quite fun, and enjoyable!
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes, I agree with the rules.
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - No bullying.


Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - The acting of a rule, Like being in a play. Or pretending.
 

What’s metagaming?: - Using something like Skype to warn other people about a coming attack, or something. Using a different method of something to effect the in-game environment.

What’s powergaming?: - Giving your character OP powers. For example: I set my skills as "Has telekinesis, can read, and control peoples minds, and he can can fly." Or; maximizing progress to achieve something, or to get something done.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - "Sir Ataric Kyfirum II"
What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Human, werewolf if possible.

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - 23

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - Well, I usually hate doing biography's. But I'll try to do my best. He was born, and raised near Arbesi. His mother died from illness when he was 11, and his father was a knight in the army, and died when Ataric was 16. And he has had his girlfriend to take care for him, and she's one of the few people he can truly trust. They've known each-other since he was 14. I don't know what else to add, I just don't like doing biography's! Just make one up, I just don't know. :(

And no, his girlfriend is not another character.

 

What are they like (personality)?: - Wise, smart, humorous. courageous, kind, compassionate, and merciful. He would willingly give his life for his girlfriend.
What are their ambitions?: - To have a good life, to love, and care for his girlfriend. help others, and become a great honorable man.

Do they have any special skills?: - He's very wise, smart, and strong.

What are their weaknesses?: -  Witchcraft, and black magic. And other stuff related to that.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: -  He has brown hair, blue eyes, some facial hair. An arrow quiver, a blue, and yellow leather tunic, and leggings, over chanmail. He also has leather gloves over his hands. And leather boots. And that's about it, I guess. If any more info is needed, I'll give it. :)
Anything else you want to say about them?: - No, that is all.



Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -  http://mcss.me/TNTcreeper25


Fantastic, there you go. No need to write any more - simply post this on our forums (and on MinecraftForum like it says above) and wait!

[cj_scout 305]

Your app has been. . .

Unfortunately I have to deny this. After the time period I gave there were things that still need fixing.

 

-I can understand you don't like writing biographies, but that is a necessity in the app. At least try to think of a story for your character, one that is unique. Where they came from, where else they've traveled, what they do for a living, how they learned to do what they do. Look at some of the other apps, to let you know the expectations.

 

-Unless you just forgot to delete it, you can't be a werewolf.

 

-I'd still like your definitions to be more specific.

 

You may re-apply one last time in 24 hours, if not accepted then you will be banned from applying for a period of time, so make it a good one! You have potential.

[cj_scout 305]

Moved to Denied Forum