[Denied]The Rambonxious' Application

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Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - The Rambonxious
How old are you?: - 13
What time-zone do you live in?: - Eastern Standard Time

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - I have, I tend to like roleplaying over most gamemodes. I have roleplayed before on Garry's Mod (Seriously, almost 500 hours of it) and on Minecraft servers.
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Yes, mostly Tshagg's RP server
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): - I have not.

How did you hear about us?: - My friends have referred me to your website and I've seen some gameplay on YouTube.
What do you think the server will be like? - I believe it will be a realistic RP experience, especially because of your firm application process.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - I have and I do.
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - No randomly telling players not taking part in a battle to turn and fight. I hate when I'm minding my own business and someone starts fighting me.

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - Roleplaying is when you take the place of a "RP Target" and live, speak, eat, act, etc. like they would. You essentially become that person while you roleplay.

What’s metagaming?: - Using outside knowledge to give yourself an advantage over other roleplayers, for example watching a Youtube video of your enemies base and finding the weakest point, or having a friend that used to be a part of their group tell you where their treasure is, etc.

What’s powergaming?: - Using aggressive techniques and the system of a game to frustrate and dominate players in a non-competitive game (eg. Roleplaying).

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: -  Allen of Daleswood

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Human, None

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - 22 Years

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - As a boy, Allan lost his father, a guard of Al'Khazar who was defending one of the final keeps in his village. He fought bravely against the undead, but he and his fellow soldiers were outnumbered nearly 10 to 1, and they were slain without mercy. He was evacuated, along with other orphans and villagers, out of the city along the King's road. As he grew up, everyday was a fight for survival. He learned that the only way he could survive was to become a thief. He has long desired to serve in the Royal guard, like his father, and take back the lands that the undead took from his childhood. So, until he is of age and his fighting skill is recognized, he has decided to remain a thief.

What are they like (personality)?: - Allan is a tough young man, always looking for something to take. He uses his charming features and fake personality to get close to the rich, and takes their possessions. Allan can be charming or a brute, but is always loyal to those who accept him.

What are their ambitions?: - He longs to serve in the royal guard, in honor of his father, and to make friends and acquaintances, helping them plunder the occasional house or farm. But above all, he wishes to avenge his father's death by fighting the undead.

Do they have any special skills?: - Due to his Thievery and training of how to use a bow from his father, he is an excellent shot, is very sneaky, and is a master of disguise.

What are their weaknesses?: - He absolutely detests snakes and scuorpions, and is an easy target for a beautiful woman. Also, he is quite clumsy when he has too mch ale, and would be easy to overcome.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - He has brown hair and eyes, stands quite tall at almost 6 feet. He does not look very muscular, but he is extremely cunning. He has simple facial features, Light, but not pale, skin, and usually has a beard that looks like he can't decide weather to keep it or shave it off.

Anything else you want to say about them?: - No

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -
 

[Daisy 9738]

Denied.

 

- Please clarify your powergaming definition. Try adding an example.

 

- No Human born in Al'Khazar would still be alive, as that was in the world of Aegis which was left over 100 years ago in RP. The 'King's Road', and 'Undead' were also only in Aegis. Your character would have been born in Anthos. Consider reading lore about that realm on the wiki.

 

- I would like some more more lore in, and length to your biography. Please check up on lore via our wiki.

 

- Your skills are overpowered, especially considering how they are barely elaborated in your biography. Consider limiting the amount of skills you have, and expand on them (why and how you obtained them) in your biography.

 

- It would also be nice if your weaknesses once again linked into your biography.

[Daisy 9738]

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