[Denied] Thatfeelings Server Application

[That_Feeling 2]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

The simplest section of the application. Answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit more. Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! 

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:  TheMrChief

How old are you?: 14

Have you ever roleplayed on a minecraft server before? If so, where?: I have played on an RP server before, I do not remember which one. However I've also played on G-mod city RP server (not darkrp a lot more serious) and I have put 300 hours into that and another 100 and so hours into a very popular SAMP RP server.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): I have not applied to this server before.

How did you hear about us?: My buddy told me about this server so I decided to apply to this server as it looks like a fun time.

What do you think the server will be like? I think that it'll be a fun and diffrent RP experience from what I have ever played before. 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No metagaming or powergaming of any kind.

Do you understand combat rules, and what you can and can’t do if you do choose to roleplay as a villain?:-

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so maybe we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Yes I do.

 

Definitions

 

These terms are a major part of the server and in a few of our rules. Please define them so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers or check on our wiki, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is taking a role of a fictional character and playing as them while on the server.

 

What’s metagaming?: Getting information with OOC  methods and using it for a IC advantage. e.g You hear about two people meeting up somewhere in OOC chat so you ambush them there because you knew that through OOC.

 

What’s powergaming?: Making your character have an unreal advantage or power in fights. e.g "You are unable to kill me because my characters skin is made out diamonds"

 

In-Character Information

 

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that you follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

What’s your character called?: Egalph Lemoph

 

What race are they? (and sub-race if applicable): Orc, Goblin.

 

What gender are they?: Male

 

How old are they?: 27 

 

Give us a highlight of their past, What life events make your character the person they are today? This is your character's biography. It is also required to include server lore when writing. (Names of towns, major server events, ect. Most lore can be found on our wiki.): The Yar Clan, a very honourable tribe or at least Egalph thought it. He and his father were walking around beside their house; it wasn't the nicest  place to live some may even consider it a shack but they made it work. But once on their daily walk for some food they saw some high classed Orcs doing some extreme treason  and plotting to kill the Wargoth, Malog'Yar. Out of aggression and respect towards the Wargoth, Egalph's father jumped out of the bushes he was surveying them and attacked them; he ended up killing them as he didn't know his limits. 

After a few seconds Egalph realised what just happened, his father killed three people and this was the punished by de-boning and Egalph's father knew that just as well and without a word he tried to pull the bodies into a ditch; while pulling the bodies towards the ditch a few guards saw what was happening and Egalph managed to stay out of the guards sight but the guards took Egalph's dad into custody.

Later that day Egalph thought everything would be fine since he did kill people only because the plotted to kill the Wargoth but a few minutes later he heard loud screaming; as Egalph ran towards the sound he saw what he should of never had seen, and after that day he cut all he tie to the Yar tribe and ran as far as he could.

 

What are they like? (personality): Smart; agile and aggressive.

 

What are their ambitions?: They want to build a large house and have a family in it. 

 

Do they have any special skills? What are their weaknesses? (Try to list a few of both): He is very good at construction and problem solving, however he isn't great at hand to hand combat and he is very shy with new people.

 

Give us a description of how they look?: Egalph is 5 feet tall and has a dark green skin, Egalph's eyes are quite close to each other and short brown hair covers most of his very thick long scar they goes through his scalp.

 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/2842640/goblin/ 

 

 

Good luck and thank you for applying to the server!

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

denied.

-Your biography is poorly written, and is incoherent.

-Your biography includes no server lore.

-Your biography is hard to follow.

-You fail to explain how your character got their skills in your biography.

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.