15th it proves that im a fail

[bobotash 0]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name: gabester27

How old are you?: i am 12

]Time-Zone/Country of Residence: i live the eastererntimezone residence

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes i do have a good grip on the the english language

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: im a very happy person and i love roleplaying games. I play them all the time. for EX. D.ungens and Dragons

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: i would probly play every day for 5 hours

How long have you played minecraft?: i have played minecraft since indfev.

What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind? look 2 questions above this

What do you expect this server will be like?:i think this server would be an awesome rp server

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i went to fake rp servers. since they were fake i stopped playing on them.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: yes i have read the rules and yes i have read the lore. i think the lore is awesome

Name the 4 races on this server.four races on this server are humans, dwarfs, elfs, and orcs

How did you hear about us?: i heard about this server from youtube

Did you vote?: yes i voted on

What was your favourite Law?:my favourite law no greifing

What was your least favourite Law?: i dont have a least favourite law.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? bobotash

In-Character:

Character Name: Henry Warner

What is your Race?: he is a human

Biography: When i was 6 a group of orcs came and raided my village. They killed a couple people and stole most of our gold and iron. When the orcs came to our house my father stepped up to save me but the killed him and they also killed my mother for no reason. After the raid the neibors decided to take me in. I was crying the whole week. Then i realised crying wouldn't do anythig so i picked up the wooden sword and the weak bow and vowed that i would avenge my fathers death. After that day i practiced with them every day. Finally i deciced to start my own life and leave the village. This is where i start the game.

Character Age:27

Character Appearance: dirtyblodn hair, brown eyes. 6"2 ,decently skinny and uasually wheres a hat

Character Personality: quite happy. always ready to help and willing to fight for his kingdom.

Your ambitions: to avenge his father and mother and be well know around ageis

Can your character read or write?: yes he can but not well

Can your character mine?:yes he can but he always ends up hurting himself

Are you a capable builder? yes i have made some awesome creations

Can you wield a sword?:no, but he can use it quite well

Enjoy Farming?:not at all. he ually kills the plants before there ready to harvest

Does your character have any special skills?:he is especialy good at handling a sword or a bow and arrow

copy and paste this to see the skin

http://minecraftskins.com/preview/both/9/137912

if you would allow me i would like too make a lets play seris of the server

Drage told me to fix my grammar in the bio so i did.

hope you like it

he is awesome by the way

bhorner told to make my sentces have more conttent so i did

hes awesome

tell me what to fix if its bad

and tell me whats wrong so i know what to fix this time please acually tell me whats wrong with it

[MrZombez 35]

Denied

Please re-evaluate your application, changing your In Character information, or formatting your application to look pretty for our eyes.

Thanks for applying,

MrZombez