[Denied][Pending] Littleknights's Whitelist Application

[LittleKnights 34]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!



What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: LittleKnights

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Of course

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Nope

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yup

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The mechanical standard

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): not really

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Google is awesome, need I say more?


Definitions

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What is roleplaying?: Acting out a character that is made up/fictional for the purpose of having fun

What is metagaming?: Using OOC info IC that your IC character should NOT know

What is powergaming?: Acting out roleplay with someone in a way that the person cannot react and is forced into situations without a chance to fight back and such and is also attributed with making a character overpowered



In-Character Information


Character’s name: Edward Nightshade

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 26

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):I wake up to a headache and realize I remember nothing except my name and I also notice I'm looking through a mask. I realized it was raining and went over to a puddle. I took my mask off to see an abomination. I could tell I was human.... barely.it was on that day that I swore I wold never take off the mask and that I would find the key to my past. little did I know the past was an easy thing to find if only I looked in the right place.

 

(excerpt from past. I do not know of this part IC yet) I was an 8 year old boy on that fateful day when mother was afflicted with both Ki'katta and Bo'dank at once and died. a couple days later father committed suicide from grief. I was left on the street as no one wold take me in. we lived in a small village community so nobody had time for another child and probably never would. but I took my dagger that father got me for my 6th birthday and left. I was forced to turn to thievery and got quite good at it.

 

 

I was now about 15 when the vengeful brother of a merchant I robbed found my hideout. he was quite the muscleman and he tied me up and covered my face with tar..... then lit said tar alight... and as I screamed bloody murder everything went black. meanwhile the merchant's brother saw the devastation he had created and quickly untied the boy. he then put a tight dark green suit on the boy with a hood, gave him a hat and added a mask to hide his face. his work complete he then proceeded to dump the unconscious boy somewhere safe where he would not wake up with his throat slashed but also where he would have a hard time getting vengeance. little did he know the boy had no memory.



Ambitions: Get his memory back and help make sure no one else ever goes through the devastation of mind and body he's gone through

Strengths/Talents: Quick, Acrobatic, Sneaky, Proficient with short swords and daggers 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Weak strength and frail, No memory (no sense of identity), Easily confused,

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Height=6'1
weight=123 Ibs

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): no good at screenshots but I have a link to it (public skin not mine) its also planet minecraft so there IS a preview

 

http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/the-plague-doctor/

[Readicti 902]

• Nightshade is more of a dark elf name, I would recommend changing it.
• Couple things to think about while writing your biography: Where did he grow up? Why did he turn to thievery instead of something else, like getting a job? Why didn't anyone take him in? Why did his dad give a six year old a dagger in the first place? Why would the merchant's man care so much about torturing a boy? Why would he feel bad afterwards? Why is he burning him instead of simply beating him up? Why does have have no memory?
• Your biography is lacking a lot of server lore.
• Being a dagger wielding thief is pretty cliche. I would recommend changing.
• Losing your memory before getting on the server is frowned upon because there usually is no point and it negates the entire back story you worked so hard to write. I would recommend taking that part out.
•  Your skin isn't exactly appropriate for the server. I would recommend either finding a new one or even making a request on the forums.

You are being denied for not making the necessary changes or messaging me within the 24 hours given. You may re-apply in 24 hours (from the time of this post).

[Readicti 902]

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