[Denied][Pending] Application

[DominusZork 0]

Out-of-game information:

 

my account name is DominusZork

 

I’m 15 years old

 

I’m aware this is a PG-13 server

 

I have applied to this server yesterday

 

The rule I agree to the most is the no hack rule

 

There is no rule that doesn’t make sense to me

 

I found out about this server by looking on google for a role-play server

 

 

 

Deffenitions:

 

Role-play: in a role-play game players are in an imaginary world in which they play a character and tell a story while playing

 

Metagaming: metagaming in role-play is an action the character shouldn’t do using information the character shouldn’t be aware of

 

Powergaming: powergaming is acting like something towards another player without giving the other player the opportunity to act like something.

 

 

 

In-character information:

 

My character is called Iarith

 

My character is a male

 

My character is a kha’cheetrah

 

My character is 18 years old

 

 

Little Iarith was born in 1461 in the realm of the Fringe where he lived with his parents for 4 years. But when the illness of the khorvad’s grip broke out he and his parents moved to the wilds where the grip could not come so easily. After the illness he and his parents moved to the city of Vekaro, because they wanted to see how it was like. Then the drought came. Hunting in the wilds became harder for his parents. And little Iarith became hungry. In 1465 his parents heared of the portal leading to a new realm and just as desperate as anyone else the moved to the new realm along with the others.

 

In Thales he and his parents lived happily until the great winter. Iarith was 7 years when they had to move from Thales to another realm in 1468.

 

In Athera they moved to Ohlokhar. This is where Iarith grew up until his 18^th. Iarith learned to hunt, fish, climb trees, and work leather. he liked hunting because of his predator instinct. he liked fishing because of the rewards. he liked climbing because of the view and because he is good at it. he liked leatherworking because he could his own clothing. At this age he decided to travel around the world as a courier to see world's wonders leaving his parents in Ohlokhar. during his journey Iarith came in touch with magic wich he decided to practice. since then he had the idea in his mind to become a good magician.

 

 

Personal traits are aggressive as all the kharajyr, patient which you need as a courier, adaptable as a survivor, alert as a cat, athletic as a cat and honest because the world can't stand on lies

 

Ambitions are hunting, travelling, fishing, leather working, magic and climbing in trees and on mountains

 

Strength and talents are climbing, running and hunting

 

Weaknesses and inabilities are fighting other humanoids, because he has never been a good fighter against others, and swimming, because cats can barely swim.

 

Appearance:

 

 

 

[Readicti 902]

• Reword your powergaming definition. I'm not sure if you understand it.
• Why does your character's parents choose to live in the human cities? Kha don't usually live with humans.
• Try to think of an ambition/ goal he is trying to work towards.
• Explain your weaknesses. Why can't he fight people? Can you not swim? Are you scared of water- why would he be scared of it?
• Just an additional comment: can you put in the prompt questions in with your answers? It just makes the application easier to read for the reader.
• You cannot know magic before you join the server. If you want to learn magic, you must find a teacher through rp or find a way to learn on your own.

You should spend more time looking over the feedback I've given and reading through the server rules before applying again. You may re-apply in 24 hours from the time of this post.

[Readicti 902]

Moved to Denied Forum