[Denied][Pending] Etoile A. Durant - Application

[Erifrats101 1]

Out-Of-Character Information
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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Erifrats101
How old are you?: 21
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rule against being consistently toxic and causing trouble
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Friend

Definitions
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What is roleplaying?: As the word implies, playing the role of a fictional character in a world (typically fantasy) of your choosing. Playing out a story of a character.
What is metagaming?: Using OOC (out of character) information in RP, usually to benefit oneself in some way or another.
What is powergaming?: RPing in a way that your character is overpowered, or using extreme unrealistic/”RP-breaking” methods to get one’s way.

In-Character Information

Character’s name: Etoile Anthy Durant
Character’s gender: Female
Character’s race: Farfolk, Human
Character’s age: 19
Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):
Fire. The blazing heat was all she could remember of that day. The last day she had seen her parents . The day she lost her brother. The last day she was a Farfolk slave. All the slaves of the Kiryuu estate had decided to flee that day. There was weeks of planning, and she could remember her father being one of the lead conspirators. She was 14 the day they launched the plan. There was a grand distraction of an explosion. Her mother grabbed her and her brother, and they ran from their shack of a home. They met up with their patriarch, and ran towards the gates with at least a 100 other slaves. They had almost made it when the fireballs struck. The Kiryuus had enslaved magicians as well, to act as overseers. They were proficient in dark magic, and it rained flames upon the escapees. She remembered the screams, and her mother pushing her away and to the ground as she was struck. Her father urged her and her brother on as he went to aid their wailing, burning mother. She last saw them right before the next wave of flames hit, before her brother pulled her out of view. Akio dragged her along until the screams were but a dull noise far from the forest. They survived out in the wild for weeks, Akio spending mornings gathering any food her could while being a silent as possible. One morning he left to go fishing while she was asleep, and she awoke to his absence. She hadn’t seen him since
For weeks she had to survive on her own, staying in the shadows for fear of any Kiryuu looking for runaways. She stayed away from villages, trying not to garner attention. One day she was starved so much she had to brave going into a town to find food and shelter. She had slept little during her time alone, night terrors haunting her each night. She collapsed on the outskirts of the town from exhaustion, sure she had died. She awoke later that night in the care of an elderly man. He had found her unconscious and brought her to his home. She learned that he was of House Ceux les Sombres. It had taken some time for her to be used to his kindness, and she repeatedly insisted leaving to lessen his burden. But he was strong-willed, and stubborn, urging her to stay, knowing she would die otherwise. She stayed with the family for years after that, taking over the more domestic ‘wifely’ duties the household had lost after the man’s wife had passed. She grew to know his two sons, and they eventually became a close family. She would never forget her original family, however, and the ‘talents’ they had passed on through generations…

Personality Traits: Introverted, keeps to herself, soft-spoken but still stuboorn. Seems to just go with the flow, adores to look at scenery
Ambitions: Stay with the family that took her in (House of Ceux les Sombres) as long as possible, repaying them for the kindness they showed her. Also hopes to find brother at some point, believing there to be a chance of him still being alive. Wishes to excel in alchemy, a familial talent.
Strengths/Talents: Excellent in domestic duties such as cooking and cleaning, has a natural knack for alchemy. Strong-willed despite seeming timid, can be sinister if influenced a certain way. Could be taught to be independent, though it would be a long process. Quick learner, can learn most things with ease.
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Is agoraphobic, has night terrors, not a physical fighter (melee and other combat). Can be dependent from use to appeasing to others (has been a slave for most of life). Self-deprecating, does not expect to be much.
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Green eyes, brown skin, long black hair with natural dark purple tints (kept tied back). Wears ragged clothing.
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://i.imgur.com/e76rlAM.png , http://i.imgur.com/7paEex6.png

[Readicti 902]

• I'm assuming the other member of the House you wish to join are also on the server, can you please message me the names of the others as proof that this is a real house?
• Your biography lacks server lore. Try spending time on our wiki page and looking for some big events your character would have experienced.
• You say she has a knack for alchemy. Where did she learn this and how much does she know?

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[Readicti 902]

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