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Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, 
this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
 
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: ivoryraven14
How old are you?: 16
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/119720-pending-ivoryraven14s-application/
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Indeed
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The combative and PvP rules most likely. 
I've had to deal with being attacked in PvP while trying to RP too many times to not appreciate it.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?
(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):Nope
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A friend
 
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
 
What is roleplaying?: Stepping into the shoes, and immersing yourself in the life, or undeath, of a character of your creation, acting, thinking, and living like they would. 
or rather like they do.
What is metagaming?::Making use of knowledge gained or deduced outside of RP or IC, 
such as a friend telling you about their character getting stabbed in the leg, and then having your character notice a limp that they hadn't revealed IC.
What is powergaming?::Something I try to avoid -.- but to be more specific, it is the act of "forcing" role-play, not giving your RP partner a chance to reply properly, ]
such as backhanding someone rather then attempting to backhand someone.
 
In-Character Information
 
Character’s name: Kali Nalla
Character’s gender: Female
Character’s race: Human
Character’s age: 20
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):
Kali lives on the outskirts of the city of petrus. Her family owns a farm, that she's worked on since she was young. She's spent much of her
time on the farm, or within the city's walls, selling her goods. All the money she makes goes towards her parents medication becasuse they are ill.  
When her parents were doing better, she wanted to leave the family home and wandered down to the halfling village Gimblewood, to attend
the gaming festival. She made a few friends there, one being a woman named Alarica Diari, they became good friends. Later Kali brought Alarica
to her family's farm, Alarica noticed that Kali didn't spend much time away from home. She asked her parents if she could take Kali on a trip to visit 
some of  the cities that are close to the city of Petrus. With Kali's parents permission Alarica took her to visit the cities, along with bringing her to the 
Viridian pub, where she works. Kali ordered a few drinks, and had a fun time, before walking to Alarica's house in the drood city. A few days
later Kali and Alarica ended up in the city of Annil'sul the elven capital, Kali wandered around the city, looking at local shops, and stopping to buy 
a meal or two from some taverns. Kali told Alarica that she wished to go home, so Alarica packed their stuff, and started to walk home, again 
stoppping at the Viridian pub, and Alarica's house in the drood city. As they neared Petrus, the smell of smoke filled their noses, the closer  they got
the more noticable something was wrong. Soon Kali broke into a sprint, as she worried for her parents lives. When she got close she noticed
a bright light coming form the city, she ran to her parents farm to see that most of their home was burned down. She ran over to look through the 
rubble for her parents, but found her mother sitting against a stone wall, crying. Her mother explained what happened that a group of cultist attacked 
and that her father attempted to fight them off, but died in the fight. 
Kali fell to her knees crying, laying her head against her mothers shoulder, Alarica standing behind them, her face full of anger. Kali's later 
since moved in with Alarica. She begged for Alarica to train her, as Alarica was apart of a guild known as "Sword Invictus". Alarica agreed, as long as 
Kali promised to never fight unless threatened. Kali's mother remained wthin the city of Petrus, helping those who lost loved ones or homes, but later 
died of sickness, as she had no money to buy her medication.Kali later went back to the city of Petrus, to find the king handed it over to
the rebels, her anger boiled deep within, as she swore to one day fight with the last group willing to stand up, and take her city back.
(( Links to some of the guilds/Events that were mentioned)) 
(( Alarica Diari = EmoGuyGothic))
 
Personality Traits: She cares for nature, and her friends and family. She hates to see someone or something in pain. She's calm and collected
And very down to earth, she has been looking into becoming a druid for quite sometime, but is worried it won't fit her well.
Ambitions: To one day take back Petrus.
Strengths/Talents: She's a experienced tailor. she's spent her early years of her life, working on her family's farm.
Weaknesses/Inabilities: She's affraid to fight, and if she does fight she tends to surrender, but wishes to over come this fear with the help of Alarica.
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Long black hair. dark blue eyes. she's 5" 10 and is 157 pounds. 
her eye's sometime, in the correct light, seem to become a lighter shade of blue.
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):ZCUvwJZ.png
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  • Is Alarica a real character on the server? If she is can you please add a username, if not maybe rethink her being apart of the Invictus as no one in the group would know who that is or recognize that you were taught by her.
  • Why does Alarica live with druids if she is apart of Invictus?
  • You say she is an amazing tailor,  but where did she learn it from? It's also a little bit of a cliche to say your character is amazing at something when you first join, look into maybe learning on the server from a master.
  • You say her ambition is to one day settle down with a family, which is a common ambition but your biography seems to be pointing in a different direction. Try to tie a more domestic feel into your biography if you think this is the direction you want to go.
  • You also say she is afraid to fight as a weakness but in your biography you say Alarica is training your character to fight and she wants to help take back Petrus.

 

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