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Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
 
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: CalebTheCaveman
How old are you?: 16
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Yes, https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/120655-calebthecavemans-application/
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Both sides have to agree to pvp.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No.
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? fournier5 told me about it.
 
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
 
What is roleplaying?: Acting out as an entity and acting how they would in their life. Speaking, moving, thinking, ect how they would realistically.
What is metagaming?: Using out of character information such as names over the players head or viewing threads on the forums for knowledge in game. (I.E. /me looks above Deruu's head instantly knowing his name and culture.)
What is powergaming?: Forcing actions upon another player or doing unrealistic actions in character (I.E. /me dodges all your hits and claws your throat killing you instantly.)
 
In-Character Information
 
Character’s name: Ringuu
Character’s gender: Male
Character’s race: Kha'Tigrasi
Character’s age: 28
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):
Kitten Years
Ringuu was birthed as a Kha'Tigrasi during a year of prosper for the Kharajyr people.The mainland of Va'Khajra was rich in resources and made everyone joyful and careless. This feeling transferred to the new kitten Ringuu, and his parents Draw his supposedly Kha'Tigrasi patta and my Kha'Pantera munna Luuna. The first year of Ringuu's life was easy going and had no worries or cares besides fresh fish and milk. He spent most of his time whining for more food and milk, and if he wasn't he was most likely sleeping. Occasionally Ringuu would crawl around and take miscellaneous objects from the ground around him. When Ringuu's family celebrated his second year of birth his muuna explain he would be having a new per'ta or mau'na. While Ringuu didn't understand he would soon would as his per'ta was born soon after the one sided conversation. Arguus, a young pantera like his muuna was born on a dark stromy night and spent the night with his per'ta and muuna. It was when Tla'Xerdun deceased when violent racial acts happened from the Kharajyr towards all others. The orcs decided to strike out after a deal failed that was started by Tla'Xerdun, they seized the city and forced the Kharajyr out. This war marked the date of the death of Ringuu's patta and the fall of the Va'Khajra and Karakatuan empire.
 
Following the war Luuna became very depressed and barely had to motivation to feed her kittens. Ringuu and Arguus barely understood was was going on and quite often asked where there father was in there newly developed language. They didn't have much but their tattered hide clothing and a small tent on the island of Val'Korsa. Luuna soon lost her faith in any form of God, and no longer taught the kittens about religious or brought them to religious gatherings. The kittens now learned about how evil the world was and how you can lose everything so fast. Ringuu didn't quite understand his mothers anguish and found himself isolating himself from her depressing state of mind. He learned to walk on his own and speak from the yelling of the neighbors. He learned to cuss at a very young age. His brother on the other hand clung to Luuna and acted as if he needed her help.
Cub Years
Finally getting a hang of walking and talking Ringuu began doing small house hold chores to ease his mothers workload and pain. Now with a peaceful culture between most races the Karakatuan began rebuilding their empire. Ringuu began bonding with his brother Arguus and playing tag and hit rocks with sticks propelling them into the air. Although the two were very close they strayed apart to persue seperate passions. Ringuu looked towards furthering his people and their new found land, as for Arguus he just told Ringuu to be safe. Ringuu took his per'tas word as a blessing for his future, and began learning the arts of war and fighting. Ringuu practiced sword fighting on a tree behind his home where he tested speed and strength mostly. He also took out his anger on this tree, he complained to this tree, he cried to this tree, and through this he became one with nature. Most of his strength came when he had to build his family home with Arguus to pretect more against the elements, the once close brothers rarely spoke about what they had gone on to do with their cubhood. It was too late, the harsh elements had go to Luuna and she had come down with serve sickness. The two young Kharajyr visited separately, when Ringuu arrived at his mothers bedside, he was riddled with guilt and pain as he felt like he hadn't been with her enough. They bonded with her last few hours and she told Ringuu how much he looked like his patta and how he had grown into the young kharajyr he would have wanted. She said that he had left him a black armband that was a symbol of peace and strength, she pointed him to a box under the bed and he got the cloth tying it around his arm and in the time it took him to do that his mother passed. 
Adulthood
Ringuu now had a new feeling towards his mother, she had given him closure towards his patta. He now wanted to help the Kharajyr grown and show they could be strong and peaceful. He decided to train harded and with a wider variety of attack and defense strategies. He moved from his mothers house to pursue making a new hold for Kharajyr who wanted to be part of a growing cause. He invited his per'ta to command by his side and awaits an offer. 
Personality Traits: Intellectual, strategist, manipulative, good liar, quick to anger, brooding, hypocritical often, smug, sly, and not trusting.
Ambitions: To return to pain the orcs caused on his people.
Strengths/Talents: Learns quickly, manipulative, good liar, physically gifted.
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Quick to anger, doesn't allows know when to stop, blood rage, and boastful
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 5'8" 158 pounds
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Sadly I must deny this as you applied before you 24 hour mark. This will be your only warning, please wait a full 24 hours from the denial post before reapplying. You may not reapply for another 24 hours from this post.

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