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[Lorensen13 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Lorensen

How old are you?: 20

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: That you do not tolerate "Hacking"

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Some friends told me about it

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying are when you live yourself into the character (like making a new personality)

What is metagaming?: it's when you help your character with different task that the character would not have been able to do if not for yourself

What is powergaming?: Are when you focus on maximizing a preferred spec in a game

 

In-Character Information

Character’s name: Lorensen

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Dark Elf

Character’s age: 25

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Lorensen is a young elf that someday seeks to rule the kingdom, on his journey he have been experiencing a lot of hardships, since at a very young age he was kidnap by a bunch of dwarfs that made him works in the mines till he could escape

Personality Traits: Kind to almost anybody

Ambitions: Wishes to someday that he will rule the kingdom

Strengths/Talents: Nightvision (due to his scarlet red eyes)

Weaknesses/Inabilities: araknofobi (weakness against spiders)

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; 210 cm & 75 kg):

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): 

[D A N N Y 966]

Your application is DENIED.

 

Definitions: Your definitions are all incorrect, and limited. Please browse through either our forums, otherwise the internet for future reference. A tip for the future is to apply examples where possible.

 

Backstory (Biography): Your backstory/biography is too short, and does not reach the minimum of TWO paragraphs, as well as any form of server lore. The backstory/biography fails to provide any form of detail about your character, apart from the fact that he is a youthful elf, and was enslaved by dwarves. Your backstory/biography should include your character's past, and all key events during his life that has impacted him to be what he is today. It should not be rushed, and should be one of the most time consuming sections of this whole application.

 

Ambitions: Your character's ambition is unrealistic and more than likely impossible.

 

You may apply again in 24 hours from this verdict.

 

Should you have any questions feel free to personally contact me via the forums.

[D A N N Y 966]

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