Aceeri - The Rebeller

[Aceeri 7]

This is when Aceeri is about 9 years old then it progresses to about 21 years old. Then after that, the present starts.

Chapter 1

Standing at his makeshift table, Aceeri ate his bread. It was enough to feed him, for he was growing up, but without any money to support him. His parents died a long time ago by bandits and raiders. He swore an oath that he would kill every last evil person in the world after his parents died. He kept that oath. When he was 9, he lopped off the head of a bandit trying to kill some innocent people. He has the head as a trophy now in his room. Where he keeps all the severed heads of his enemies. Then one day, he went to the city. When he was strolling around, he heard the voice of someone crying, "People he isn't fighting for justice he just wants to..." Then there was silence. He looked over to the voice, only to see a strange dwarf with the head of the man. Angry, Aceeri was about to throw a knife at the dwarf, that was when a guard saw him and tackled him, before he threw it. Aceeri knew that dwarf wasn't exactly "good" and he looked more like a bandit, than a warrior of justice. After that day the guard threw Aceeri out of the city, never to be allowed in for a month. Aceeri muttered, "I will kill you dwarf, I know you aren't a good person."

Chapter 2

While walking home to his little house, he saw a strange smoke in the air. Curious, he ran towards the source. His feet made a rythmic pattern as they hit the ground, he worried if his house was on fire. When he reached the source. He was right, sadly, but right. He got on his knees suddenly. He knew he would be dead then, but then a man came out of no where and saw what had happened. "Eh kid, what are you doing so close to a fire! You might burn yourself," the man said. Aceeri found himself saying "That was... my home..." "Hmm, I'll take you to my place, you can stay with me for a while! Say, who is yer' parents?" "They died..." "Oh..." And then on out, there was silence between the two of them, as the house burned to the ground.

Chapter 3

...Five years later...

Sitting on the stool waiting for breakfast to come. The man came out saying, "Here is your pay for helping me with the farmin' n' such." "It was really no problem, you can keep the money." said Aceeri. "No I insist." Then he took the money from his pouch and put them on the table. "Here," he said. Giving Aceeri a money pouch and some money. "Thank you!" exclaimed Aceeri. "It not a problem, you are like a son I never had!" said the man. "And you are like a dad to me," said Aceeri while he was chuckling. "Hurry! Eat up before they go sour!" They had this little joke going on for a while, because when he first went to the man's house, he waited a lot longer than he should have on the food and when he ate it he screamed "Sour!" So then on they had this little joke of theirs. "I'm going to the market, do you want to come with?" exclaimed the man. Aceeri told him "Why not?" They got up from their stools and trampled out the door with some money. When they reached the market, the first thing he saw was a sword, hung on the stand of the stall. Aceeri was drawn to it. "How much for it?" asked Aceeri. "For what exactly?" the stallkeeper said. "The sword." "That will be... 2437 Minas please." Aceeri looked into his pouch at all his savings. Taking out all his money he had just enough for it. Giving the man 2437 minas, he hurriedly took the sword. Amazed by the beauty, he ran up to Leslt. (Thats the man's name that had a lot of hospitality for Aceeri) "Leslt! I just bought this sword!" exclaimed Aceeri, "Amazing isn't it?" "Ye', if you say so Aceeri," said Leslt.

Suddenly Aceeri heard some screaming. "Ahhhhh! Let me go you killer!" said a man being tackled by a dwarf that looked like the one he saw a while ago. Walking over to the scene. He heard an anguished scream, then silence. Looking at a dwarf with a blade smeared with blood, anger washed over Aceeri's face. Driving him to lunge his sword at the killer. As he lunged the killer dodged to the side. Looking at the dwarf in the face, Aceeri said,"You... Die!" Aceeri slashed again at the killer. Dodging again the killer took out a few throwing knives and tried to throw them into Aceeri's skin. Aceeri ducked and the knives whistled over his head. Then a scream. Both Aceeri and the dwarf looked over to the source of the scream. There, Leslt was kneeling on the ground... bleeding.

[Aceeri 7]

Chapter 4

Running over to his dead foster parent. He screamed, "Murderer! Assassin! I will kill you for that!" With that the dwarf ran off, for he did what he had to. Sobbing on the ground, no where to go. Aceeri laid there, like he was dead. For he practically was dead, in his heart. He threw his sword on the ground. Still sobbing that the man he knew the most and was the closest to, was dead, just like his parents. He thought he was the one who had attracted all this killing. He picked up his sword, put it to his chest. He was about to thrust the sword into his chest when a voice said,"No! Don't!" He stopped, but he still had the sword to his chest. "Don't kill yourself, boy!" said the voice, strumming along with the sound of running footsteps. "Why not! I have nothing left in my life, my parents are dead, everyone I'm around dies!" yelled Aceeri. "It's not worth anything to kill yourself! Get up, boy!" yelled the voice. Soon a man came into view and helped Aceeri up. Soon the circle around Aceeri ceased and broke out.

"Who are you?" asked Aceeri. "I am the lead barracks trainer, Belkim." "What do you want with me?" "I want to train you to become a great warrior. I saw what you tried to do over there, you have potential."

Chapter 5

--Coming soon--

[Aceeri 7]

Reserved for story

[Lawrence Berell 226]

Sick!

ooc who was the bandit?was he wearing robes?like the ones off of assasins creed?

[Aceeri 7]

OOC The bandit who lopped off the man's head was Margarok, read his story, you will see that it intertwenes with his.

[Lawrence Berell 226]

the bandit who lopped off his head was Magarock, read his story, you will see that it intertwenes with his.

ah,just a few people have intertwined my story with thieirs(village destroyed etc,parents killed by assasins)

[Aceeri 7]

OOC I just made a few new chapters. Read em if you want.

[ijsselzichta 0]

Well, that dwarf sounds a bit like me and does something that i once did, but i swear i am not evil!

[Aceeri 7]

From what I've seen you are...

[ijsselzichta 0]

Open your eyes.

((OOC, i will be adding a little thing to my history this evening or tomorrow to show that im not "evil" but "good"))

[Aceeri 7]

OOC I might add a little bit of my story to intertwine with others and yours... Like I did with the man's head lopped off.

[ijsselzichta 0]

OOC, i liked that you did that, i will maybe intertwine other parts of your story into my story also *Cough*Fight with killer on that market*Cough*

[Aceeri 7]

OOC Great idea! Plus "I" just bought a sword

[ijsselzichta 0]

OOC, added my part.

[Aceeri 7]

OOC Alright