[Denied]Thedragons App 2Nd

[thedragon100 1]

Before I start I am dyslexic so please do not be too hard if I misspell something

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:thedragon100

How old are you?:14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): yes https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/123241-thedragons-app/( sorry it has been so long stuff came up and I could not work on this)

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes         

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: ”Structures that defy the laws of physics, underground or automated farms, floating leaves and strip-mining”

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules)” same question as as last time as it was not anwered when I was deined

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: roleplay is going in to a character mind and acting like they would talking like they would.

What is metagaming?: metagaming is using ooc info ic so knowing someone’s name before they tell you.

What is powergaming?: powergaming is doing something that your character they  can’t so like wall jumping.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Fokil Stump

Character’s gender: male

Character’s race: Forest Dwarf

Character’s age:25

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 

Fokil grew up on a farm close to the Grand Kingdom of Urguan. His family had a dairy farm so that took up most of his time as a kid, but when he did not do that he would play with fake swords to pass the time whether it was with his younger brother or with a tree he found fun in swing a sword around.  But he did love taking care of the cows and would not mind putting in more hours than normal if it mint he got to spend more times with the cows. His younger brother did not fell the same way as he did he hated working on the farm and he hated that Fokil was so much better than him at it But the one thing he was always better at was reading  because Fokil could not read his mother tried to teach him but he just couldn’t it was not a skill that he was mint  to have.

            When Fokil was 8 he was walking thought the barn  and heard  a weird noise so he went to investigate. He walk around the barn for a while till he heard it again and felt a strange presser on his head. He lifted his hand to feel what was on his head and before he could get a good sense of what it was it bite him. He then used his over hand to hit it of his head. When he saw what it was he  yelled “SPIDER”  but this was normal spider this spider was huge atleast six inches ( or 15 centimeters) in width. So he look down at his hand which  now has a huge red mark  look back up and the spider and bolted out side and show his mom and dad the bite. He could not fell his hand for a straight week.

It was a quit day at his house he had just finished up his days work on the farm when the whole earth started to shake he and his younger brother ran inside.  Plates where falling of the shelves and his parents were just as surprised as they were. Then the first words were heard “Freedom” he ran outside to see who said it but saw no one just a pillar of fire from the north and then he heard "Mark this day well Mortals - Today... Today marks the Beginning of the End. No more shall my Wrath be hindered... I will choke the life from each and every one of you pathetic creatures.”  And as the sky grew dark no one said anything not a world they all just went to sleep and pretend it never happed.        After he had time to take this all in he wondered how long he had left if it was a few days or if he still had a good few years left in him before whatever said that did what he or she or it did what are going to do going to do. This thought went thought his head a lot s he worked or as he sleeped he thought about it a lot.

It was just another day in his house hold when the door burst open it was his dad. He was at Urguan to buy more food  but now he stand here before them covered in sweat. He let out a sigh of relief and said “your ok” to witch he said “ what are you talking about “ his dad look toward him “ the Ordium has fallen”. He heard of the Ordium before but did not know what this had to do with their safety so he asked “ what does this have to do with our safety”  

“ not just that but there are rift opening up with gross monster coming out of them but I am just happy you safe”. Fokil then walked to his bed and sat down to think he thought of the day when whatever it was talked about killing everyone and the thought he had that day then he thought what if we can fight it. He knew not just himself could do it but what if he helped stop what ever this thing is and if he was going to die he atleast want to go down hitting so he told his mom and dad he want to leave and at first they said not but he wore them down and left.

 

Personality Traits: He does not warm up to people very well. He is more laid back than but not by a whole lot. He is very adventurous.

Ambitions: he dreams of story’s being told of him and song being song of him for any reason he just wants to be rembered.

Strengths/Talents: he is very good at thinking his feet and is ok with a sword but was never professionally trained

Weaknesses/Inabilities: he can not read and is terrified of spiders

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): he has dark green eye and pure black hair. He is the normal height and weight for a forest dwarf.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here) http://imgur.com/gallery/ZiKS92l/new

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

 

-You havnt dont anything with your definitions from your last application.

 

-Your application is so massively full of typos and grammatical mistakes that it is difficult to read and understand nearly every single part of your application. PLEASE next time take a second look over your application and make sure it is coherent and properly written.

 

-Your character's biography is extremely incoherent, and hard to understand.

 

-Your character's skill of "thinking his feet" makes no sense...

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any further questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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