[Denied][Pending] Lambo's Whitelist App Take 2

[Lambo 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: mocara

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Banning discrimination or prejudice

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Just the word "Derogatory" but I know what it means now

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Looking through rp server lists

 

Definitions

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What is roleplaying?:Pretending to be a character

What is metagaming?:The use of out of character (ooc) information to change the out come of a game ex.I know someones bad at aiming so I use it use it to my advantage.

What is powergaming?:Having no weakness (being overpowered) 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Farndor Huntsman

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human (Highlander)

Character’s age: 26

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Born in the Fringe on the 11 of The First Seed, to a woodcutter Gorndor Oaksman and his wife Waidin Strimaid, Farndor lived a difficult childhood. His parents had no interest in taking care of him. At age 9 they moved to the source of the Nocibur River. With neglictive parents, Farndor had to fend for himself. Stealing the bow his father kept for defence, he learnt fish, trap, swim and to make or take what he needed. His parents abandoned him and left moving to Petrus. Farndor began to steal and hunt, makig a living until he was 17. In the 11 month of his 17 year, he met a girl washing clothes in the river. He fell instantly in love. But Catelyn Highrun was hard to woo. After 2 months of courtship she finally agreed to marry him. After 2 months Catelyn was pregnant. But during labour Catelyn died. The son lived but consumed by the greif of his    lose, Farndor smothered the child. He burnt them and scattered their ashes in the river. He retreated back into himself and became isolated. He began to have trust issues. He lived the rest of his life in solitude and only coming into contat with other humans when selling his wares.

Presonality Traits: Shy, Brave, Lacks compassion(due to the lose of his wife), Riddled with guilt

Ambitions: To find the love he lost

Strengths/Talents: Good Hunter and Fisher, Horse Rider, Merchant, Quick Reflexes, Tinker

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Greif, Illiterate, Fear of commitment(underlying root of fear:Fear of being hurt by love), Shorter Left arm then right

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Height:6'1", Weight:9 st 6 lbs, Hair:Brown rugged stubble, Eyes:Blue/Grey empty, Skin:Freckled Pale, Left Arm: Slightly shorter then right(From 3 fractures after climbing an ent) Clothes: White Shirt, Green Overcoat, Blue Ragged Trousers,A Brown Sidebag

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[Tirenas 677]

You have 24 hours to make the following changes. Please feel free to contact me once you have updated your application and/or if you have questions.

• Your character cannot be 26 years old yet born in the Fringe.
• Having parents abandon your character and then having his wife and child die is incredibly cliche, thus I ask that you change it.
• Please elaborate upon your definition of powergaming as it isn't very clear at the moment.

[Tirenas 677]

This applicant has not fixed the aforementioned issues within the allotted time, and thus is declined on the basis of inactivity.

[Tirenas 677]

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