APPLICATION user: ClayDoc Second try!!! DENIED (template)

[ClayDoc 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: ClayDoc

-How old are you?: 11 soon 12.

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: +1 central europe.

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yeah it's pretty good I think.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm a kid who searches for something fun to do on my freetime. I love rpg and books.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:5 hours+ I think.

-How long have you played minecraft?:I have played minecraft since alpha.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:I have been playing rpg games. I'm also an wannabe writer and when I write I feel like I'm living there lives.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect it to be like really living in a fantasy world or to have a second awesome life in a game.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on smp servers but I stopped and I have also been playing on my brothers server.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:Yes I have agreed to all I have been reading.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Elfs (awesome) Humans (ok) Dwarf (also ok) Orcs (scary but cool)

-How did you hear about us?:By accident. I saw it in someones signature and I looked at it.

-Did you vote?: Yes on all three

-What was your favourite Law?: Maybe no graffiti.

-What was your least favourite Law?: Everyone was fine by me

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:ClayDoc

In-Character:

-Character Name:ClayDoc

-What is your Race?:Elf (Wood Elf I think)

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:ClayDoc((?)What do you mean I have already answered this)

-Biography:

I grew up with a dad who always expected the most from me, but I never was able to make him say the only five word I wanted to hear "I am proud of you". Since I was kid I always loved archery. I used to train every day. I wanted to be an archer more than anything in the world. I was always pursuing my dream with no thought of looking back. I knew that I would be able to live my dream someday and that made me able to try my hardest. That was why I left my home so that I could continue to chase my dream without falling behind, and one day I will become the greatest archer of the world. Even if this story might take some weird and unpredictable turns, it dosen't matter. The journey have and always will be the main part of a story.

-Character Age:19

-Character Appearance: It's not much to say I look like a normal elf. Pointy ears, normal white skin, blue eyes, brown hair and blue and grey clothes.

-Character Personality: I've studied under my father to gain enough knowledge to have an answer to all conflicts that's thrown against me so some people call me smart. At home I didn't meet much people and I'm very shy thanks to that. I'm also very quiet and don't like to engage in big conversation with strangers but atleast it's easy for me to talk to friends.

-Your ambitions: I aim to become the greatest archer this world ever seen and I will do everything in my power to make my dream come true so that I can finally be accepted by my father.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes

-Can your character mine?: Yes but I like the fresh air at the surface more.

-Are you a capable builder? I'm not a master but I can build basic houses and some bigger projects.

-Can you wield a sword?: I'm not good at it but yes I can weild a sword if it's needed.

-Enjoy Farming?: Yes I enjoy farming becouse I like how peacefull it is and that I got time to think.

-Does your character have any special skills?: I'm a pretty good archer and have good linguistic skills.

-A screenshot of your skin:

(Don't know how to show image.) It's the "Elven assassin" by alexayr and it can be found in the skindex.

-Other Information: I really hope my third application gets accepted and I think you have done a great job with the server.

[Slayer15855 3]

Denied.

You need an extensive and indepth character. That means you need an awesome biography and also indepth analysis of your characters ambitions, personality etc... You character is the entire point of this game, you need to put a huge amount of effort and detain into it. It is basically a second person. Make it fun and interesting but not ridiculous, and always within the lore.