[Denied]Chairs90 First Application

[Chairs90 4]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Chairs90

How old are you?: 18

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I most agree with this rule because it wouldn't make sense for people to create hundreds of characters with different races that have no relation to each other. "

You're only allowed to play as one of the approved races - they're listed on the wiki."

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Recommended to me.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: This occurs when multiple people engage in chat or emotes that create a story.

What is metagaming?: When you, the real life you, use information that you character hasn't yet learned for roleplaying.

What is powergaming?: When someone does multiple actions at once without allow the other person to react inbetween the actions.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Sampson Ralzor

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: High Elf

Character’s age: 17

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Sampson is a High Elf that was kidnapped by a Gobo named Omar Grimmer at the age of 8. Omar addresses him as "Albai Znaga" when he is spoken to. The only thing Sampson can remember before Omar kidnapped him was his name and the looks on his parents' faces as his house was being burned down.

Sampson doesn't own anything except for the clothes on his back, an axe, and a small amount of Minas. Omar often puts him to work at a local tree farm. Sampson hopes to be a better slave and one day to be something more to Omar than just a slave. 

Personality Traits: Loyal, Oddly enjoys a hard day's work.

Ambitions: To please his owner.

Strengths/Talents: Lumberjack.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Doesn't own a pair of shoes.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 5'9 tall, weighs 160 pounds, light blonde hair, blue eyes.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot.

[Lita 677]

 

While your application was a talented attempt, there's a couple of things I'd like you to do before you are accepted.

 

First off, expand upon your powergaming definition a little bit: while you're not wrong, there's a little more to it than that.

 

Second, your character cannot be under 18.

 

Third, I'd like you to add a little more server lore to your bio, perhaps a general location or something of the sort. The more you weave in there the better, however.

 

I'd also like for you to expand upon your strengths and weaknesses a little bit.

 

You may reapply after 24 hours have passed from the denial time below. If you have any questions, feel free to send me a message.

Edited March 30, 2015 by Lita
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[Lita 677]

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