[Denied]Application For Lofc

[justDEWit 133]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: funny981

How old are you?: I am only 11 about to be 12. 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, I am.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No I haven't this is my first time.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have a I agree completely.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Having to use a skin according to your lore.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): I know and understand all of the rules.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was looking for LOTR and role-play servers.

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is created something or someone you want to be and play your role in society. 

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is using knowledge beyond something your character knows.

What is power gaming?: Forcing someone do to something.

 

In-Character Information 

Character’s name: Rundon Tiss

 

Character’s gender: Male

 

Character’s race: Uruk

 

Character’s age: 19

 

Biography: 

Rundon was only 3 years old when his family was killed. Only his grandpa survived so he took Rundon into a cave and tought Rundon how to survive. He was very old so he was very wise and Rundon learned many crafting recipes from him. Every night Rundon went out to go get something to eat and one night he couldn't find anything. He saw an Dwarf caravan with all of the food from the surrounding area. He ran and jumped on the Dwarf caravan with speed. He was very weak in arm strength so he quickly off of the caravan but was able to grab a bow and arrow. He shot the the driver in the head so he died. Rundon then went up to the caravan and got some mushrooms for dinner. While he was walking back to the cave, he felt a quick pain in his back. He fell to the floor and looked back to see an armed Dwarf. His grandpa came out of the cave with a sword and battled the Dwarf warrior. They both stabbed each other in the chest at the same time and died. Rundon mourned for his grandfather for 8 years since he was his only family. He took the caravan which was in bad shape and started heading to the Dwarf Mines to fight them. Halfway there, his caravan broke down and he saw a fire. He went to the fire and saw a whole camp of Uruk. He joined the Uruk and told them his story. They felt like he had some real rage so they took him in and tought him how to fight. While at the camp he made a friend he called Tartar and they became the best of friends. He then fully mastered his skills by 19 years old. Rundon got on a horse with lots of food and water to venture the Middle Earth to kill every last Dwarf.

 

 

Personality Traits: Very aggressive, Loves to be in command, Great sharpshooter, and Hates to lose

 

Ambitions: Rundon wants to kill all of the Dwarves for revenge

 

Strengths/Talents: Has acute hearing, can see far, and knows many recipes for crafting

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Lacks arm strength so he can't shoot fully charged arrows, and Horrible with a pickaxe so he mines slow

 

Appearance: Skinny, Light armored, Large eyes, 2 Big teeth

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin: http://wvw.minecraft.novaskin.me

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

-You need to expand upon your meta-gaming definition. Maybe use an example?

 

-Your powergaming definition is incorrect.

 

-Your character's biography is incoherent, and hard to follow.

 

-Your character's biography is devoid of any server lore.

 

-You dont explain what this 'caravan' was he rode on. Was it a house? A covered wagon?

 

-Lord-of-the-craft does not take place in middle earth.

 

-Having one's parental figure killed by a random one-faced group/person and vowing revenge is extremely cliche.

 

-You put as one of his weakness he's not so good with bows n' arrows- yet you put in his biography that he killed a dwarf by shooting him with bow.

 

-You need to expand upon your character's appearance, as for all one can tell- he's simply a child with buck-teeth.

 

-You failed to include a minecraft skin, as the link just takes me to the skin maker 'novaskin'.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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