[Denied] Application

[XxGirly_Gam3rxX 2]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:XxGirly_Gam3rxX

How old are you?:14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Not to troll

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?Youtube. Link:www.youtube.com/watch?v=P3Mm0f25d0

What is roleplaying?:Acting.

What is metagaming?:Out of character

What is powergaming?:Video games, role playing games, and board games.

Character’s name:Octavia

Character’s gender:Girl

Character’s race:Kha'rajyr

Character’s age:18 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):She is a orphan that was treated as a slave.She still stayed strong being nice.Soon she ran away because her orphanage mother kept starving her.She soon found Ordium.Her brothers and sisters were skinned and so she ran off being alone

 She now lives here and she is free to be.She still hasn't told anyone she her back story.She wants to be a normal Kha'rajyr.

Personality Traits:Nice,Kind,adventurous,Loving

Ambitions:To explore all of ordium and other citys

Strengths/Talents:Singing,adventuring,Running away from things, acting innocent

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Seeing people get hurt,getting hurt,Water

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):Is 5ft tall and weighs 80 Pounds

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere):http://gyazo.com/40dd9ff1efabde43885f752099ba33f6

[James 425]

Your application is

 

 

You are not aloud to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• Expand on all your definitions.
• Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are both incorrect.
• Please use server lore in your backstory which can be found here. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page
• You can not apply as Kha, you must apply as one of the four main races or their subraces (this includes halflings). As well as that, change your characters skin with it to the updated race!
• Your backstory needs to be expanded upon. (8-10 sentences, decent 2 paragraphs)
• Expand on your characters appearance 

 

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

[James 425]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.