[Denied] Server Apply

[the_D_crafter 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:the_D_crafter

How old are you?:14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:no griefing

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?l

i look on the wiki

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:rolepaying is pretending to be somone

What is metagaming?:um i dont know

What is powergaming?:i dont know

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:finwe

Character’s gender:mail

Character’s race:elf

Character’s age:5000000

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):i fell from heven and i landed in mithlond but as a little boy i got lost and was fond by 2 dwarfs momy and popy my new famly and later i reternd to my elfen famly 

Personality Traits:smart kind but can good to fast somtimes

Ambitions:Good eye site 

Strengths/Talents:good with a long bow

Weaknesses/Inabilities:no as good with a sword

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):tall trim 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):file:///C:/Users/Daniel/Desktop/2015-06-04_14.02.52.png

[Harri 4815]

 

Denied.

 

I’ve denied you for the following reasons:

 

• You can't answer with 'I don't know' for the definitions. Next time go and fill them in.
• You can't be 5000000 years old as an elf. They can live only to a maximum of 1000.
• Your bio breaks all kinds of lore, as well as being terribly un-detailed. You can't fall from heaven, there isn't a place called Mithlond, and you don't describe how any of the events actually happened.
• Good eye sight isn't an ambition.
• You linked me to a screenshot on your desktop, not an actual screenshot. You need to upload it first. There is a guide on how to do this.
• Your grammar and punctuation is all around bad, and it just seems like you haven't tried on this application. Next time, try to work a bit harder at it.

You may try and re-apply in 24 hours from now. Feel free to contact me for any help you may want, I’ll try my best to do it.

[Harri 4815]

Under review.

[Harri 4815]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.