[Denied] [Pending] Application For Server

[Althalos 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Constipated_Crow

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, I am.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No, I have not, this is my first time.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I have.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: That you have to have an RP reason to start a war.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No, there aren't.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? From YouTube videos.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: The performance/pretending of another character/role within a game.

What is metagaming?: A player who uses out-of-character information to gain an unfair advantage in roleplay.

What is powergaming?: A person exceedingly good at one thing, designed with absolute power, but lacking in other things.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Althalos

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 20

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Althalos is a tactful, stubborn and self-reliant Highlander. This isn't surprising considering for someone with his gruesome past. He was born and grew up in a successful family in a poor port in Athera. He lived without worry until he was about 7, but at that point, things took a turn for the worst. He lost his parents when they left after a brutal war and was shunned. Alone, with no one to look after him, he had to survive in an unkind world, but with his vigour and capability, he managed to keep ahead of the curve and conquer all fears and doubts. This has made him into the man he is today.

 

With the lessons of the past, he is now a rogue man, who lives on his own in the depths of The Forests of Adrallan, dependant on no one, looking after himself. By doing so, he hopes to find inner peace and finally find peace of mind he has never had. His only wish in life is to die a good, honourable death in Athera, where he grew up, and would give his life to protect his Realm.

 

He realises that death is inevitable. Each day he wakes up alive, he doesn't stop death, but merely postpones it to a later date. He therefore, does not fear death, but has made death itself his sworn enemy. A much stronger opponent, whom Althalos knows he cannot combat, and avoids any confrontation with. 

Personality Traits: Vast vocabulary of old English, and socially active.

Ambitions: To bring the living of all races together to live in peace and harmony for ever.

Strengths/Talents: He is an omnipotent swordsman and learnt to fight on his own. H is quick to act, strongly built, and had the senses of immortal man. He does not rush into a battle he knows he might lose, and carefully lays out the possibilities of the fight, and the possible outcomes of each scenario, giving him a psychological edge over his opponents. He is a strategist, and is known to outplay his enemies physically and mentally.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Love. His only weakness in life is and always has been a broken heart.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Strongly built, above average male: 85kg and 1.90 metres.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): 

[Pureimp10 5691]

Your application is...

 

Your application is pending for the following reasons:

• Your metagaming definition is wrong.
• Your powergaming definition is wrong.
• Your biography really doesn't make sense. How are you going to combat death?
• Your biography doesn't contain any server lore. Please check out our wiki for the lore of the server.
• You must provide a screenshot of your skin.

You have 24 hours to make the edits I've requested above.

 

PM me if you have any questions or comments. Be sure to tell me when you've made all the edits so I can take another look at your application!

 

Your application is...

 

Your application was denied for the following reasons:

• Your definitions are plagiarized. Plagiarism is a serious offense on LOTC, and we do not take it lightly. Next time you plagiarize, you will be banned from applying. Consider this your first and final warning.

You may reapply in 24 hours.

[Pureimp10 5691]

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