[Denied] Sairar's Whitelist Application #2

[Sairar 6]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Sairar

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, I'm aware.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Yes, once.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I have.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: powergaming i would agree the most.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Would you be able to roleplay your wolves attacking people?

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

I definitely enjoy Roleplaying, and of course minecraft. So one fateful day I decided to mix those two and find a server that did both of those. Not many out there so I stumbled upon here. I cant wait to be immersed into this alternet dimension!

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is pretending to be in an alternate environment using things such as chat, and in game events to determine situations.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming basically using OOC to benefit your in-game character. Ex; OOC: Jake was banned for making an unfair shop that gave away free items. And then a guy goes there just to get free items to benefit.

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is when you do something your character would not do during roleplay. (Dodging every move, Randomly going up and stabbing people as a guard.)

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Sairar

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 24

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.

 

One fateful day Sairus and Dias gave birth to a beautiful baby. They grew the baby just like any parent would living in Oren.

But things were different for Sairar. He was extraordinary with nature.

When Sairar turned 4 he was able to successfully catch a fish with his bare hands. 

When he turned 5 he returned to home wounded and scratched up by evil orcs as he traveled far from his home and was attacked by brutal, brutal orcs.

When he turned 7 he was able to tame multiple wolfs that still live with him to this day, he has used many techniques taught to him by his father to keep them alive as when they die, he fears he might not be able to recover. When he turned 8,

Orcish teenagers attacked him while he was far away from his town, trying to make a secret ditch to scout areas and store private items. The orcs did not see his wolf lying in some leaves. They were startled when they saw his wolf and jumped back. One was bitten so badly he fell down and could not get back up.

 Sairar's bond for his wolves increase and he claims the more wolves he has, the more invincible he feels.

At 9 he met a friend named Sarlock, he was a dwarf, average size. Him and Sarlock mapped out the whole lands near oren together until Sarlock's parents figured out. When his parents figured out Sairar could never see him again.

One day about a month after he turned 10, he went to spy on the  dwarves to see if he could find Sarlock. Which he successfully did. Him and Sarlock secretly communicated till this day but Sarlock's parents despise Sairar. They claimed, "A dwarf of the doomforge were never supposed to be mapping wilderness!"

When he turned 19 he became accurate with a bow, his most preferred weapon. While it still isn't that good till this day, it is good enough to fend off bandits and savages that attack him in the wild.

Sairar spent many days in the forests, alone and has learned most forests near Oren flawlessly. He even traps his own food and rarely is seen buying food, in fact he pretty much lives isolated from everything else. 

He lives in a small cabin built for defense and he believes not even 15 brutal orcs could do as much as harm a single wooden block on his house.

He can be seen growing his everlasting farm outside of his house. And he continued this way of life till this day. 

He is also obsessed with expanding his map. He feels that he needs to know where everything is and how to get there, which explains his strange appearance.

A bad thing is that he has never experienced magic, while staying secluded inside of a forest most of his life. He is oblivious to what normally goes on far away from oren. He has not opened or touched a book his whole life besides ones that he writes in. He carefully describes everything he sees while mapping out terrain inside of his book. 

so that we would not forget the great lands of oren. He is extremely fond of elves, as they aided him and gave him some knowledge whenever he bumped into elvish travlers. 

 Personality Traits: Good fisherman, farmer. Emotionless. Nothing can surprise him. A decent warrior, Helps people travel whenever he can, except orcs of course. he despise orcs.

 Ambitions: Wants to be the wealthiest farmer as possible and wants to expand  his collection of wolves.

 Strengths/Talents: Pickpocketing. Decent swimmer, though rarely is in the water. Very good at predicting when bad weather will happen. Learns special ways to grow cops in harsh terrain. Swift.

Always travels with a bow.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Is weak when fighting melee combat. Weak against all forms of magic as he has never experienced magic his whole life. Slow to react to areas that he hasnt adventured through. Still not too accurate with bows. Good enough to predict movement.

Left eye got scratched by a thorn bush, hard to see out of that eye.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 5 feet 4 inches and 186 pounds

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):    http://www.minecraftskins.net/wintertraveler

[mitto 2312]

 

I commend the effort, I really do but I must bring this up:

 

Your biography, albeit very unique it's all over the place. I would say too much has happened in your life. Remember that roleplaying doesn't mean you're the centre of the universe and the protagonist of the server, like some video game.

 

Your characters backstory just spells out overpowered. I've never seen a kid at those ages do any of those things, even if they were taught. Keep it realistic.

 

'Hating Orcs' Cliché

 

You wouldn't be weak against magic, everyone is just as weak to magic as everyone else. It's like saying 'weak to falling into volcanoes'

 

Like I said, your character is pretty an omnipotent god. Even though you state you have weaknesses I don't see them being portrayed in your biography.

 

You can re apply in 24 hours.

[mitto 2312]

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