Scout3399's application(New Bio)

[scout3399 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account:Scout3399

-How old are you?:18

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: United States

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I have a good English vocabulary and good grammar

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm just a guys who goes to school, gets good grades, and then likes to come home and unwind with a good game.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Its kinda hard to guess, but about 2-4 hours a day.

-How long have you played minecraft?: About a year and a half

-What do you know about roleplaying?: I play WoW and other RP games, so I know a thing or two about it.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I think it will be a really immersible experience like no other in minecraft.

-How did you hear about this server?: I was looking for a good RP server and I foud this one.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I used to play on Famiworld, but I wanted a more RP experience.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: I have spent time reading them both and understand them.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Human, Elf, Orc, Dwarf

-Did you vote?: Yes

-What was your favorite Law?: No destroying the landscape

-What was your least favourite Law?: I honestly don't have one, they are all reasonable and make sense.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Scout3399

In-Character:

-Character Name: Orik Goldhammer

-What is your Race?: Dwarf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Scout3399

-Biography: Orik was born into the great Goldhammer family; They are a long line of great warriors, politicians, famous scholars, and powerful wizards. His mother said when he was born that his parents, uncles, aunts, grandparents, and great grandparents passed some of their greatest skills and qualities to him, and Orik will use them to fulfill his dream of becoming what ever he wanted.

At a young age, Orik would always wander the streets of the city he lived in with his loyal dog, Chubb, and just watch the people going about their business. The people who fasinted him the most, were the warriors and the smiths that provided them with the armor and weapons they used. Because he was too afraid to get a closer look and ask them questions, he would just watch from afar, but a one day, he worked up the courage to go closer. As he took a few steps closer, one of the smiths saw him. " Oi laddie! Wha are ya doin here?" the burly smith asked. "I-I-I just wa-wanted to get a cl-closer look at your work." Orik replied. "Oh, very well. Then com ere an I'll show ya" said the smith. After the smithy dwarf showed him the basics and some more advanced aspects of his work, Orik asked him if the the warriors would mind if he asked them some questions. "Oh, I'm sure they would'n mind." As Orik stood there watching a dwarven warrior show him some moves of fine swordsmen ship, he realized that he wanted to craft weapons and armor with expertise, and wield them with precision.

At the age of 18, Orik was accepted into the ranks of the Kal’Urguan City Guard, and every few days he would go on patrol in defense against the Orc, but when was not doing that, he would practice his swordsman ship or practice his smithing skills. After doing this for 4 years, Orik decided that he needed to fulfill his dreams. When he presented the idea of going on quest to accomplish his to dreams to his parents, they encouraged him, and gave him their blessing.

Now here we are. Orik is off on his quest in the world of Aegis.

-Character Age: 22

-Character Appearance: Stout and Muscular, Long Brownish/ Blondish Hair and a Long Flowing Beard, Pale Skin from the long days spent in the mine

-Character Personality: Likes a good drink, Talkative, Intelligent, Easily angered

-Your ambitions: -Become the Grand Master of the Smith

-Found a Dwaren Mercenary Guild

-Master the sword

-Master the art of the smith

-Become one of the greatest warriors in the history of Aegis

-Can your character read or write?: Very well, indeed

-Can your character mine?: As a dwarf, Orik is an expert in the mine

-Are you a capable builder?: As a descendant of many great architects, Orik has great knowledge in constructing buildings

-Can you wield a sword?: Orik was trained by some of the greatest warriors in the Goldhammer family to wield a large array of weapons

-Enjoy Farming?: Orik has a some minor knowledge of farming

-Does your character have any special skills?: -Minor Magic Ability

-Excellent smith

-Great swordsman

-A screenshot of your skin:http://minecraft-skins.com/2011/02/honeydew-skin/

-Other Information:

[Slayer15855 3]

Denied.

You need an extensive and indepth character. That means you need an awesome biography and also indepth analysis of your characters ambitions, personality etc... You character is the entire point of this game, you need to put a huge amount of effort and detain into it. It is basically a second person. Make it fun and interesting but not ridiculous, and always within the lore.