[Denied] Blackbaer's Application

[BlackBaer 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: BlackBaer

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: All rules are good :)

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No everthing is clear

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Internet

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: A video game genre where you controll a character in a fantasy world

What is metagaming?: When a player uses informations that his character don't know

What is powergaming?: When a player does something that his character should not be able to do

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Devon

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Dwarf (Mountain Dwarf)

Character’s age: 38

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 

Devon was born in a little village in the North of the Kingdom of Urguan. His Father is a weaponsmith and his Mother weaves wear, Devon has a sister Kessa she is 30 and works in the Tavern. Devon learned from his Father the Blacksmithing. His great dream is to become a Soldier in Kal'Azgoth. He loves to be at afternoon with his friends in the tavern and drink Met/Beer. He don't like Elves because his Grandfather was killed by an Elve. Devon works hard with his Father day for day to earn enough money for his Family, it's a hard live but they are happy with that what they have.

 

Devon has now gathered enough money to begin a new life far away from his home, in the Capitol town of the Kingdom of Urguan, Kal'Azgoth. He say goodbye to his family and friends, packs the most important thinks in his little bag and goes into his adventure!

 

Personality Traits: He is loyal, courageous, and sometimes hotheaded

Ambitions: He wants to become a Soldier in Kal'Azgoth

Strengths/Talents: He is a good (weapon) smith, he fights good with sword and shield, his body is well trained

Weaknesses/Inabilities: weak for gold, he hates spiders, he is not fast

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): He has a long brown beard and medium length brown hair, he is 4ft ( 1,48m).

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

 

http://imageshack.com/a/img538/7965/tgYVbI.png

[James 425]

Your application is

 

 

You are not aloud to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• Clarify on your roleplaying definition and fix your incorrect powergaming definition. 
• Add current server lore to your biography, currently your server lore is that of a previous map, current server lore can be found under Vailor/Athera on the wiki or by asking myself. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page
• How did your character become skilled in combat?
• All Dwarves are weak for gold, seeing as the Iblees curse roots itself in the race.
• Try to improve on your grammar/sentence structure in your application. 

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

[James 425]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.