[Denied] Delsaran - Application

[nowaybroholycow 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:

bisnitch

 

How old are you?:

14

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):

Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):

Yes https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/131500-delsaran-application/#entry1257341

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:

Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:

Structures that defy the laws of physics, underground or automated farms/furnaces, floating leaves and strip-mining, are not allowed.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

I don't understand  what happens if your character dies.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

After searching for WoW Minecraft servers on Google.

 

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?:

It is when you play as a made up charecter.

What is metagaming?:

An out-of-character action where the player knows and uses information that the character shouldn't.

What is powergaming?:

Forcing actions on another charecter.

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name:

Delsaran

 

Character’s gender:

Male

Character’s race:

Dark-Elf

Character’s age:

21

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

   Delsaran lived with his parents until he was 13 when they were both killed by a criminal. He then trained an trained to kill those people until he was lured into the darkness. He was abducted into killing many people. He even payed to kill off entire families. But one day, he met a girl. Her name was Amra. This girl helped him stay away from the darkness.

   This girl had the face of an angel. Delsaran fell in love with her on first sight. She taught him to be loving and compassionate once again. Delsaran learned to control the darkness inside. He harnessed the shadows and used them to his advantage. He soon became an assassin again. Although, he only agreed to kill the meanest criminals. He would never kill innocent people again. But sadly, Amra's story ends shortly after Delsaran started to date her. But he didn't let that bring him into the darkness again.

Personality Traits:

compassionate,

gentle,

Ambitions:

To stop evil beings from ruling.

 

Strengths/Talents:

strong,

can harness the shadow,

swift,

can see well in the dark.

Weaknesses/Inabilities:

Over-ambitious,

soft-hearted.

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

6ft. -Height

140lbs.-Weight

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/6203809/delsaran-2/

[mitto 2312]

 

Your biography is very cliché, a lot of characters have had both of their parents killed and are on some sort of dark and gritty revenge quest, honestly it sounds a bit edgy. What makes your character different? Please redo your biography and make it more exciting.

 

Your biography lacks server lore. This is a must and probably the main reason for the denial of your app. You can find lore here:

http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page

 

Please explain why your character has those strengths, weaknesses and personality traits. For a lot of them they can be simply explained. For instance if a characters weakness was in sword fighting it would probably be because they never practised etc. Please explain your character in detail.

 

 

You can re apply in 24 hours from the time of this denial.

[mitto 2312]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.