[Denied] Application

[Jandom 1]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Jandom

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: I read most of it the villans section I skimmed over , but i think i have the jist of things.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The dice rules , I have made a rpg before so I know how tough randomization can be

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): The last combat rule is confusing and what does gm and LWC mean? Also what is a moonstone?

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I found out on youtube.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: A mix between writing and make belife , a brilliant mix!

What is metagaming?: Taking advantage of knoledge that your character doesn't know

What is powergaming?: Making your character perfect and unstopable

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Nexbaz,Lur

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Orc Goblin

Character’s age:24

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Nexbaz is a Lur from the trickster bloodline. He barely passed their rituals because of his light weight and lack of strength but he luckily passed though they were so ashamed they withheld a lur wolf (a demerit that would be horrifying to a Lur). This made him somewhat of an outcast in his clan. He then decided he would serve his clan by inventing and tinkering.

He seemed like a failure to the tribe. He knew this. But he had payed attention every night when the elder would share wisdom. One proverb the elder had taught was "Confidence and determination repare all." With this knowledge he will earn his respect some way . . . ((I hope that wasn't to gushy for orcs XD))

 

Personality Traits: Surprisingly Self concious for an orc though he doesn't show it , can be a bit "creative" when inventing , Shy but once he knows you he becomes very social , noisy

Ambitions: To revoultionize orc armor with machines like moving blades , to bring glory to the Lurs

Strengths/Talents: is creative and imaginative , intelligent , good at hunting and war strategies

Weaknesses/Inabilities: not that strong or endurant , lacks commen sence , cowardly

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Height: 6'2" Weight: 314 Lbs.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): [img]http://i.imgur.com/LscQgnJ.png?1[/img]

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Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

- All three of your definitions lack in depth and satisfactory detail.

 

- You need to include at least 3/4 pieces of server lore in your backstory - more than you currently have included. 

 

- You need to make sure to read all the rules in detail.

 

You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

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