[Denied]Patrick Bateman (ZenithV)

[ZenithV 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: ZenithV

-How old are you?: 27

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT + 8.00 Western Australia (Perth)

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes I do.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: My name is Edward Lim, when I'm not at work, I enjoying playing games, mainly Minecraft. I am a very capable builder and are one of the most highly reveered architects on Mikeland (Creative Freebuild) and I've been admin on 3 servers. I am both friendly in real life and out of character.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 30 hours + every week.

-How long have you played minecraft?: One and a half years now.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: Roleplaying is taking on the role of a character. When roleplaying, you are no longer yourself, you are an entirely different person based on the characteristics and traits of the charcter you're portraying and the society around you. You only have knowledge of what your character know.s

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I assume this server is going to be great because I planned on making a server with a very similar play style to this server.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: NakedInsects was the first server I played on. I left because after a few months, it went down. The next server I moved to was Mickville, where I recieved admin rank after 1 month, this too went down after a few months. Mikeland was the next significant server in my Minecrafting history, I became architect in a week and one of the most reveered architects among the admins and overlords. I left Mikeland to return to Mickville, which went down for a second time. Lastly is Oceania, a server I created node2.redstonehosting.net:25596. Some of my amazing masterpieces can be found there, but I fear that the owner and me can no longer support it.. So I hope to seek refuge here at LotC. I do hope you accept me.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I am willing to abide by the rules.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Human, Orc, Elf, Dwarf.

-How did you hear about us?: I found the server on a Minecraft server list.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: ZenithV

In-Character:

-Character Name: Patrick Bateman

-What is your Race?: Human

-Biography: I hope to live in the Kingdom of Oren, in the West. My name is Patrick Bateman. I am twenty-seven years old. I believe in taking care of myself, in a balanced diet, in a rigorous exercise routine. In the morning, if my face is a little puffy, I'll put on an ice pack while doing my stomach crunches. I can do a thousand.

There is an idea of a Patrick Bateman, some kind of abstraction, but there is no real me, only an entity, something illusory, and though I can hide my cold gaze and you can shake my hand and feel flesh gripping you and maybe you can even sense our lifestyles are probably comparable: I simply am not there.

-Character Age: 27

-Character Appearance: Dark brown hair, toned body, strongly built, 6 ft tall, smooth pure skin, wears a white top with suspenders and black pants.

-Character Personality: Bateman is extremely style-conscious, well educated, often expresses a converse loathing of poor people and in reality a violent sociopath.

-Your ambitions: Patrick's goal is to fit in with upper-class society and earn loads of Mina.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes, very well.

-Can your character mine?: Yes, but rather not.

-Are you a capable builder?: An extremely capable builder.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes, but prefers to use an axe.

-Enjoy Farming?: Able to, but he believes farming is for lowly peasants.

-Does your character have any special skills?: 1000 Stomach Crunches

-A screenshot of your skin:

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/847/20110903211842.png/

I created this skin with Paint specifically for LotC.

-Other Information: I've played Ultima Online so I'm quite familliar with mechanics related to it. I plan on becoming a psychopathic villain, who commits murder, sex crimes, cannibalism and necrophilia.

[EliTe137 0]

i like your bio but dont no if its long enough for the standards of the moderators

[ZenithV 0]

Thanks, I hope the moderators like it too. If I'm not accepted, must I create a new application, or can I just edit this application?

[Whitebeard 126]

Please don't write your bio in first person.

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/

[ZenithV 0]

Please don't write your bio in first person.

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/

Okay, do I just change it to 3rd person? Do I create a new application or just edit this one?

[Whitebeard 126]

Ahh probably be easier for both of us if you just made another thread. Feel free to PM me when your done.