[Denied] application number 2

[Starrkiller555 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Starrkiller555 

How old are you?: 14 years old

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): I am fully aware and believe this rule suits the server.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I mostly agree with the war rule, which states that one can not declare war unless he/she has a reason to. I believe this a good rule since it gives more depth to the roleplaying in the game.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I found out through my brother who just got accepted (Starrgazer555)
 
Definitions 
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
 
What is roleplaying?: Acting out your part, or role, for a game or a play/ musical. For example, on a server like this one a guard would try to stop a person from stealing, or roleplaying as guard.
What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when you do something based on knowledge your character couldn't have obtained. Like when you come to a friends aid after he told you he was in trouble
What is powergaming?:A player can be described as a power-gamer if he or she presumes or declares that his or her own action against another player character is successful without giving the other player character the freedom to act on his own prerogative. It would be doing a actions and or actions over and over without giving the player the chance to react or do something.
 
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
Character’s name: William Featherton
Character’s sex: Male
Character’s race:Human Highlander
Character’s age: 25
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):      My name is William Featherton. My earliest memories are those training in the far away land of Kathersa, a cold northern country. Since my country is a war  driven nation it was expected of me, being a healthy male, to join the military. So day in, and day out I trained. My family was a rich one, so I became a Knight. My horse was given to me by my great uncle Rangnor Steal, he was 140 years old! He was the elder of my local city, Knosh. My country is a just one, but cold and merciless one all the same. People in Kathersa expect more out of there young than other nations do. By the age of 14, I had already experienced war, as a field trip they called it. I killed a man at the age of 17 as a way to show my loyalty. And at age 18 they kicked me out of the land, as a way to tell me I need to be become my own man, and to not come back until I have made my mark. 
                    So I was on my own. I decided to go to Vailor to make my mark, and decided to become the leader of an army for a Guild. I went to many places on my journey there. I came from the north, and made my way down south till I eventually got to Felsen. Sadly, I got in many fights. I got in fights with many races, but most of my troubles came from orcs. By my land, there were few orcs, so I had no idea what they were. That is how I bruised my left eye. I got in a fight with a goblin, I know this since he was red, and instead of killing me he slashed my eye. He stole my items, and after that I was very poor. I went to the slums to live and tried to find any work I could. I have since come to know the cruelties of life.I also foolishly ran into a war between dwarves and men between a bridge. The humans won and I made my way. I then went to Felsen. It had nice guards and a mysterious fellow named Octavius.
       I have become very cold, knowing the injustice of the poor and the rich, so it is my quest to form a guild for justice, and to command the army. And I plan to never return to Kathersa, never again. I will now try to make my way to Oren and seek my relatives. Hopefully I will find them but if not I will visit Octavius for help. I will do everything in my power to aid Marden.
See bio of StarrGazer555 (we are related)
    

Personality Traits: Cold Heart, Loyal, Independent, and mysterious.

Ambitions: Start/join a guild and lead the army.

Strengths/Talents: Leader, loyal, strong, and just

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Bad vision, uneasy in hot temperatures, unsocial

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 6 foot, Light skin, 185 pounds, scar on left eye, brown hair, brown eye color, animal skin as coat.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):download_(1).thumb.png.c56a748300cb09404
 
Edited 3 hours ago by Starrkiller555 
Definitions and need to add lore

[AGP 3169]

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

-Applicant failed to wait the 24 hour period before re-applying.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advise and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[AGP 3169]

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