whitelisting [Denied] my second application

[richard858 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: richard858

How old are you?:18

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes and i agree whit the rules

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: about rasicm and sexisem

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:That you play/become a character and interact as that character whit other persons who do the same this involve responding to situation or events

 

What is metagaming?:that u use information that you get form somewhan of outside the game or that is OOC (Chat room, TS3, Skype) it gives us a advantage in battle, events or just in the game

 

What is powergaming?: powergaming is that he overpowerd his role-play character or making his character invulnerable/invincible like deadpool regeneration abilities this can ruin his role-play expirience

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Kulgha

Character’s sex:male

Character’s race:orc

Character’s age:25

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

iwas borned in a village called the trog my father wanted to learn my to hunt instead he was killed by a dwarf group while i had to run to warn the village when the uruk warrior form the village where there he was dead my died when i was 16 i was then still furious form what dwafs did to my father my mom died form a snake bite it poison  didn't came out we they did everything to save her since then i was afraid of snakes now i learn to fight whit swords later i shall become a fearsome warrior of the amry form my rex of i shall make a clan and fight in his name i shall take my revange on this dwarfs for what they did i had to do every thing in my own now i shall let them se what a orc can do when i his furious and nobody ever told a story that he survived form a furious orc attack.

Personality Traits:Furious and hate dwarfs

Ambitions:to rais a new clan or fight and rais my rank in the army of my rex

Strengths/Talents:good sword fighter and good tactician

Weaknesses/Inabilities:scared of snakes

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): im like 1,85 tall and 75kg i am pretty strong and i always wear my armour

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[James 425]

Your application is

You are not allowed to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• Your powergaming definition is too vague
• Your biography isn't long enough, and lacks enough server lore. If you need help with server lore feel free to ask myself or consult the wiki http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page
• The application isn't completely filled out
• Expand on strengths and weaknesses, how did he become a good tactician? 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

Edited October 26, 2015 by James

[James 425]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.