[Denied] [Pending] DarkusRelling's Application

[DarkusRelling 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
 
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: DarkusRelling
How old are you?: 15
Are you aware the server is PG-13: Yes.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes, and yes.
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No Hacking/Griefing. (I don't like cheaters, or griefers :P)
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?: Not really.
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A friend, he's awesome! (RalphGiezer)
 
Definitions
 
What is roleplaying?: Pretending to be a character within a story. Usually done for entertainment.
What is metagaming?: Using knowledge that your character does not know against your opponents.
What is powergaming?: Always winning, no chance of losing, completely unfair.
 
In-Character Information
 
Character’s name: Myrrha Centuria
Character’s sex: Female
Character’s race: Dark Elf
Character’s age: 57
Biography: 
Myrrha was rather... peculiar among elves, to say the least. She always had dreams of being both hero and villain in a story, and never took the time to make friends. The only things she would study were the bare necessities, with one of few exceptions being arcane magic. She lived alone in Luminaire before the corruption, studying bit by bit on how to use magic, and trying to invent new spells, ultimately failing to do the latter.
 
During the corruption, she ran off with visitors from far-off lands. She thanked them endlessly, traveling with them, over mountains and through valleys. After a few years, she reached a decision to stay with them. As some joined and departed from their group, she stayed to be the (ironic) light of their emotions. Although her friends can be bothersome, she intends to stay with them as long as possible.
 
Personality Traits: She has a near-balanced mix of different personalities, claiming to have a "rainbow" aura.
Ambitions: Exploration, Fun.
Strengths/Talents: Making music, making art, fast learner (with the right facts).
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Childlike, ignorant, very stubborn.
Appearance: Midnight gray skin, with pale silver hair. Wears a torn cloak over a short-sleeved blouse and short skirt, both colored a dark violet. Wears brown leather boots. Has a pendant hidden in her bodice.
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[Lego XBOX 915]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed it on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below. You have twenty four (24) hours to make these changes, message me if you have any questions or concerns. Failing to fulfill the requested changes will result in this application being denied. By being denied you will have to wait 24 hours before re-applying with the proper changes in place.

 

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki for elves can be found on the Wiki here! It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore into your Biography such as certain places, wars or even significant event. I liked that you included the old capital of the elves & corruption, but try and add a bit more -- make those 'far off lands' something related to the LotC world.

For example, the dark elves tried to form a settlement further from the corruption - called Darkhaven.

 

Unfortunately, your character can not have any form of training or understanding of basic concepts of magic. Your character must learn that once you are whitelisted on the server! Please make the proper revisions so that they follow under the guidelines of the request.

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request given above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around the time of 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

[Lego XBOX 915]

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

Applicant failed to make (all) requested edit(s) to the application within the given 24 hour period.

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advice and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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