Thadeous's Application

[Thadeous 0]

Out-Of-Character:Thadeous

-Minecraft Account Name:mrsinatra

-How old are you?: 16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: United States East Coast

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:My name is brain, I like to video games and sports. Minecraft is one of my favorite games! I also play on steam.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I have a job and school, probably 30hrs.

-How long have you played minecraft?: since alpha.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I am an admin on a Garry mod RP server for about 2 years so allot.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Fun, I watched my friend play it. Its also serious.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on my friends until he closed it down.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes

-Name the 4 races on this server. Human, Dwarves, elves, and orcs.

-How did you hear about us?: my friend sean.

-Did you vote?: Yes

-What was your favourite Law?: No griefing

-What was your least favourite Law?: don't have one.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?Thadeous

In-Character:Thadeous

-Character Name: Thadeous

-What is your Race?: Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:

-Biography:Thadeous is a loyal human, who makes a living by being a bandit! He was a knight until he was discharged for stealing a golden cup.

-Character Age: 28

-Character Appearance:Med-build, long hair, goatee, about 6ft 3 and weighs 185

-Character Personality:Thadeous is intelligent, and a bit of a ass to people who are of less intelligent

-Your ambitions:He wants to be rich! He will do anything to get gold.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes both!

-Can your character mine?: Yes.

-Are you a capable builder? Yes.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes.

-Enjoy Farming?: No.

-Does your character have any special skills?:]Mainly an average person, but he is fast.

-A screenshot of your skin: I was going to get one for the server once this got accepted.

-Other Information:

[NairOG 1]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

-Contains elements of meta-gaming.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been.

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Also, do NOT contact me in order to view your new application.

[Thadeous 0]

Out-Of-Character:Thadeous

-Minecraft Account Name:mrsinatra

-How old are you?: 16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: United States East Coast

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:My name is brain, I like to video games and sports. Minecraft is one of my favorite games! I also play on steam.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I have a job and school, probably 30hrs. Maybe more depending on the time.

-How long have you played minecraft?: since alpha.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I am an admin on a Garry mod RP server for about 2 years so allot.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: This server will be a very serious server is I

have seen from my friend playing on it. It will also be very fun and exciting.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on my friends until he closed it down.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes, they are all very fair. I should have no problem following them.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Human, Dwarves, elves, and orcs.

-How did you hear about us?: my friend Sean who is a Dwarve.

-Did you vote?: Yes

-What was your favourite Law?: No griefing, and the no destruction of the landscape.

-What was your least favourite Law?: don't have one. All the Laws are fair.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Thadeous

In-Character: Thadeous

-Character Name: Thadeous

-What is your Race?: Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Thadeous

-Biography: Thadeous was born into a wealthy family, but one day that all changed. His family was murdered by a group of orc bandits on their way home from a quest. Thadeous was the only one who survived because he hid in a crate. The orcs had taken the crate not knowing what was inside. They had opened the crate up once they had returned to their kingdom. They did not kill Thadeous because he was only 8 years old at the time, so they began to train him in the ways of stealth and blunt weaponry. Once thadeous was 16 he was very thankful to the orcs for the training but Thadeous killed them because they killed his family. One of the orcs had esacped however. Thadeous wants to find him and kill him.

-Character Age: 21

-Character Appearance:black skin, Med-build, long hair, mustache, about 6ft 3 and weighs 185

-Character Personality: Thadeous Is polite, kind, great sense of humor, a jerk when he needs to be, and is very outgoing!

-Your ambitions: He wants to find the orc who escaped and kill him for killing his family

-Can your character read or write?: both

-Can your character mine?: Yes.

-Are you a capable builder? Yes.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes. Hes better with a blunt weapon though.

-Enjoy Farming?: No.

-Does your character have any special skills?:]Very stealthy and a great marksman.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/193/62515248.png/

-Other Information: That should be it.

[Mint 0]

-Biography:Thadeous is a loyal black human, who makes a living by being a bandit! He was a knight until he was discharged for stealing a golden cup.

I'm still waiting for a GM to look at my application so I'm not experienced with this but....

Your bio is too short. Before double-posting it, make it longer, and put some effort into it. Show that you can actually RP. Two sentences is way too short, plus you made up something in a couple seconds. In mine, I spent a good 45 minutes thinking up my story, and developing my character in my mind before writing about him. You should do the same.

-Just trying to help! :)