[Denied] Application For WhiteL

[Helskor 9]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: SuigetsuHozu

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I mostly agree with NO cyberbulling. Cyberbulling is a horrible crime that is something i completly disagree with

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I found LOTC threw looking for RP servers!

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is the act of playing as something or someone in a present or fictional reality

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is out of rp Talk and etc.

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is rp that reaches a goal.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Asteal Nocturne

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Ghost (I know I needed perm to become a ghost, so I did it threw this.)

Character’s age: 26

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): It was a dark, stormy night. Asteal was sitting on his rocking chair in his small home. He had just got home from a hard day of work at the bakery. Asteal was a good kid, never got in trouble and did what he could to help others. That night a horrible thing happened to him.... It was about 2:00 am when he heard a scream! He jumped up after hearing it and rushed to his window. He looked out to see a women running for her life. He then heard more screams and then he saw what was wrong. Theyre in his own eyes, he saw the wrecthed, Lucas Black. He shuttered with fear, chills went down his spine. His house was small and encloused, he had no where to run. Asteal grabbed the pike from his chimney and ran to his small room and slammed the door. There he waited for the worse. Later, he heard a THUMP, THUMP! He knew what was coming for him, but he trembled with fear! He slowly backed into a cornor. Then with a final THUMP, came down his door. There, walked in the undead minions of the scourge! They tore everything apart till they got to his room. There, he dropped the pike out of fear and slid down to the floor. The undead rushed and slashed him down. He was alive for most of the pain. He thoguht the nightmare was over, that he could rest from this pain. But he was deathly wrong. He "Woke" in his home. He thought, I mustve been dreaming. He rubbed his eyes for what had happended became clear. There laid his dead body with scrath marks all down it. He went absoulty INSANE! He started losing his former self as years past. His cloths turned into ragged grey cloths with a hood. His skin became almost solid black and eyes, absoulte black. He had lost anything that was once Asteal and became a furious raging ghost. His home was destroyed, and he was left free to wonder the world. With this, he brungith torture to where ever he visted. He was feared to those who encountered him and was a sign of death. He was no longer Asteal... He was fear its self.

Personality Traits: No feelings, Tortures, Empty inside. All thats left is a murderous intent...

Ambitions: Asteal, has no ambitions other than to take away anything thats not fair. (Meaning he doesnt like life considering he lost very un gratefull and gives other his same suffering).

Strengths/Talents: Has no feelings making him more immune to life defying events. Hes unholy with a murderous intent making him dangoures.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: As such a unholy being, the light he hates and it burns him and the only thing that fritens him is seeing himself.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Looks in his 20's. His scars from the event are not there and are hidden by his skin. His eyes are black as night and he looks to be 5,10. His cloths are grey and tattered with a hood that covers his head. Looking at him inspires fear and reaks of unholyness.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

Edited November 26, 2015 by SuigetsuHozu
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[Pureimp10 5691]

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

 

You may not apply as that particular race. Please change your race to one listed here:

- Human

- Dwarf

- Orc

- Elf

- Kharajyr

 

Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect, please correct them using the Definitions Guide found on this post:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/126196-new-player-guide/

Remember to write them out in your own words.

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

 

[Pureimp10 5691]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.