[Denied] My Application :)

[SeventyTrash125 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: SeventyTrash125

How old are you?: I am 15 years old

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, I am aware.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:  Yes, I have read and agreed with the rules

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree with the rule 'You must have an RP appropriate skin' Because I hate when people have really random skins while Roleplaying

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Nope, I Think All the rules make sense to me

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was searching for Minecraft Roleplay Servers and I stumbled upon a website that had several different results of servers and Lord Of The Craft was at the top

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is the acting out or performance if a particular role

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is any strategy, action or method used in a game which transcends a prescribed ruleset

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is a style of interacting with games or game-like systems

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Hydale Janxwoods

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 20

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Hydale Janxwoods was born in a small village and was raised by his Parents until he was 12. One day Hydale was feeding the cattle in the village and suddenly men with swords & bows came running at the village. Hydale screamed in horror watching all the village people he grew up with get slaughtered. He tried to find his parents until it was too late. His Parents were both dead and Hydale was taken prisoner by the men with swords & bows. 3 Days later Hydale waited for the perfect time to escape. After he escaped Hydale ran towards his village to check for survivors. When he reached the village there was nothing left, he screamed in pain.  Hydale then lived in the ruins of his village for 2 weeks. Then he decided it was time to get on with life. He travels the world to find a new hope...

Personality Traits: Smart, Clever, Brave, Easily-angered, Shy

Ambitions: Not sure

Strengths/Talents: Hydale is Clever & Fast

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Hydale is Easily-angered & Shy

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Hydale's Height is 5'2

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://imgur.com/gallery/WqrasdY

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Under Review

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You have been denied for many reasons! Fix these issues below.

• You have been caught plagiarizing! Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are both plagiarized from other sources. If you are caught plagiarizing again you will face a 1 week ban per definition. 
• Your biography contains no lore I suggest looking here http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Humans Include lore such as towns and cities. 
• Your parents dying is also very cliché so please fix this for your next application.
• Your biography also needs to be a minimum of 2 paragraphs.
• Please also expand on traits, ambitions and weaknesses. Link these to a new biography you right. If you need help feel free to message me.

You may reapply in 24 hours after the time of this denial. Remember do not plagiarize again or face a ban.

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Moved to Denied Application Forum.