[Denied]Zorac Aldeher second try

[Zorac 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

Zorac56

-How old are you?:

13 but don't hold that against me :D

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

USA

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

Well I am a kid however on many servers I have played on they mistook me for a adult. I enjoy reading and playing video games(I am also trying to write a book.) And I always love to rp I have been playing D&D for about a year but we dont have many people for it.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

Maybe a hour a day or so(depends on homework really)

-How long have you played minecraft?:

I have been playing minecraft since early alpha

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:

As I said above I have been playing D&D for about a year

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

I think this server will be fun with many great people and hopefully serious Role players

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I have played on a server called "Dawn of Nobility" and I left them for two reasons, the first was that they called themselves a rp server when they where not at all and second I still played because it was fun however they then made it so you had to install a mod pack to play on it and I did not like he mods they selected.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:

I have read AND understood the rules and the one part of the lore that confused me is why the daemon still cursed the orc when he did not accept his temptations.

-Name the 4 races on this server.

Human

Elf

Orc

Dwarf

-How did you hear about us?:

I heard about you through "Reckreationz" youtube channel.

-Did you vote?:

I did indeed vote on all three sites or is it cites?

-What was your favourite Law?:

My favorite law was the no random killing within cities because no one like being killed whilst shopping

-What was your least favourite Law?:

My least favorite law was the law that made theiving a punishable offense unless of course you mean punishible as jail or bounty instead of kick or ban then it would be OK. of course this doesnt pertain to my current Char because he is a Holy warrior that does not break laws.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?

"Zorac"

In-Character:

-Character Name:

Zorac Aldeher

-What is your Race?:

Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:

Zorac

-Biography:

Zorac was born on the summer solstice into a family of peasants. His father was named Joseph, and His mother Ayleth. They lived in the city of Snowy Fields, part of the great kingdom of Oren.

Zorac’s earliest memories were of watching his father standing at his workbench sewing and repairing shoes. He could never understand why his father did this, as he did not enjoy standing around and doing nothing. If there was anything he did like, it was exercise and hard work.

Zorac was only 5 when the undead came. He only remembers 2 things from this attack. The first was a zombie breaking down his door, the clawed hand smashing a hole through the door and clawing at the lock while his mother screamed at him to go upstairs. But Zorac barely had the power to scramble away and cower in a corner. Then he heard a *click* and realized somehow the zombie had actually unlocked the door. As the zombie walked in, it first noticed his mother standing tall in the middle of the room. As it shambled towards her, she slashed out with one of the kitchen knives and made a long gash across its chest. It looked down in surprise at the ichor oozing from its wound but then continued towards her. It pulled back its claw and slashed her across the throat and she was dead. That was when the seed of his dark festering hatred of undead had been created. Zorac screamed and immediately regretted it as the undead horror turned towards him.

However, it barely took a step nearer to him when there was a crash and what was left of the door flew inward and hit the zombie in the back. Its attention temporarily diverted, Zorac ran back toward the stairs, but what he saw in the door once again froze him in his tracks. A tall man in shining armor charged in at the zombie with his iron sword raised high above his shoulder. He cleaved down and chopped off the zombies arm. The rotting fiend screamed in rage, as zombies can’t feel pain. It was a sound that sent a shiver down Zorac’s spine and left him weak in the knees. However, it didn’t seem to phase the shining warrior at all. He just pulled back his sword and tried to lop off its head, but the zombie jumped back (as well as a zombie can jump) and swiped at the warrior with its clawed hand. The decomposing hand seemed to burn as it came near the cross the man wore around his neck and the cross itself seemed to burn with inner light.

It was there, looking at that light, a holy light, that Zorac realized he needed to be part of the church. He always disdained them because of their little robes and begging for power, but seeing this warrior with the cross, he knew it was more than that. He realized he could be just like that holy warrior, that Paladin, a fighter for God, a fighter for justice.

The second thing Zorac remembered was his father bursting in the broken door yelling his name. He managed to let out a small whimper and his father looked at him, relieved. But then his fathers eyes fell on Aylan with the holy warrior leaning over her and he stumbled over to his beloved wife and started sobbing. The paladin was leaning over the stricken woman with his cross blazing with holy light, but then suddenly it died out and he shook his head.

“She’s dead” he said sadly, and he got up and walked out after saying he was very sorry he couldn’t save her to Joseph. Zoracs father then walked over to Zorac and sat down beside him on the stairs. He put his arm around Zoracs shoulder and said,

“it’s ok we can go on, just the two of us, eh?” Zorac smiled a little and went upstairs to sleep.

After that, he would always play fight with the other kids in the town. They would always meet inside the large storehouse and fight with sticks and pretend they where soldiers. However, unlike the other kids, he did not stop when he turned 13. He continued to practice swordsmanship. He really wanted to have professional training, but his Father could not afford it. Therefore, he spent all his free time swinging a wooden sword that he had made at the wooden post he had dug into the ground. All of this practicing without actual training led to him having a very unique fighting style.

Although his father thought this quite silly, Zorac had a very good reason to practice with the sword. Ever since that undead attack, he knew he needed to be a paladin and so he was training to be one. So when he was hanging out at the old cross roads inn when he was 18 and heard that a merchant caravan was heading out. He thought it was the perfect time to earn some money and start his adventures.

So he ran home and he and his father started making clothes. First, they made a white shirt out of sturdy cloth and followed up by making a matching pair of pants. Acting on a sudden urge, Zorac sewed a red cross onto the front of the shirt. The very next day, wearing his new clothing and carrying a stone sword given to him as a going away present, he left with the caravan.

Today he is 23 and his clothes are much more worn but he is far from done. You never know what adventures a Holy warrior may have…

-Character Age:

23

-Character Appearance:

Zorac is a strong but thin man with smooth brown eyes and perpetually messy black hair. He is about 5' 6" with smile wrinkles around his eyes and mouth despite his young age.

EDIT: his clothing is quite basic since he does not officially work for the church yet he wears a homeade white shirt with a red cross on them and homeade white pants both of these are rather worn and ragged.

-Character Personality:

Zorac is always ready to laugh or smile but also keeps a cool head in harsh encounters his one weakness is how much he despises undead and opposers of the church he throws away all reason when facing them.

-Your ambitions:

Although new to this world Zorac plans to do many things including becoming a warrior for the church(paladin or sumsuch) and owning his own farm. he wishes to bring honor to his family and always knew he would be a follower of the church.

-Can your character read or write?:

Due to early education Zorac can easily read and write.

-Can your character mine?:

Although not very expeirienced at it Zorac can indeed weild a pick

-Are you a capable builder?

Although he marvels and the massive adn beutiful structures others make Zorac can not make much more than a log cabin. (this was pretty hard to write as I am actually a pretty good builder :D)

-Can you wield a sword?:

Although he never got proffesional training he worked at it enough and practiced since he was young with sticks or anythign he could find he is a skilled fighter with his own style.

-Enjoy Farming?:

Zorac has always dreamt of owning his own farm which would pale the small garden he grew as a child

-Does your character have any special skills?:]

Some might call him fighting the undead he hates a "breserker rage"

-A screenshot of your skin:

EDIT: I forgot to mention in case you where wondering I made that skin myself I hope you like that also :D

[NairOG 1]

...but the zombie jumped back...

wut wut

...“it’s ok we can go on, just the two of us eh?” Zorac smiled a little and went upstairs to sleep. ...

best twist ever.

Your application lacks punctuation's but I really enjoyed the bio. Before you enter world fix punctuation's.

[Zorac 0]

fix the punctuation on my bio or make sure to use proper punctuation in the game?

[NairOG 1]

fix the punctuation on my bio or make sure to use proper punctuation in the game?

Both

[Zorac 0]

oh well OK I can do that easily I probably should have reviewed it before I posted but I tend to get caught up in the writing a lot more then the punctuation it will be revised shortly.

[Zorac 0]

fixed it

[Zerragon Stormborn 4]

Impressive bio. Im sorry our guards couldnt protect your mother. Good luck with your holy adventures, and you farm dream. (Id be suprised if you dont get accepted) :)