[Denied] APPLICATION

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Brockling

 

How old are you?:12

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

 

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):Nope

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yep!

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The one about no harassment.

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Nope!

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Google search for Roleplay servers

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Taking on the persona of a fictionalized character and playing out their life, goals. ambitions, wants/needs. This involves thinking about situations from the character’s point of view, and responding to said situation how they would respond.

 

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is taking information you know oocly and making it so your character knows it. For example: Jim knows(his character Devyn doesn’t know) that Sally put 30,000 diamonds underneath her floorboards, Jim makes devyn know this and proceedes to dig up the diamonds and use them for his character.

 

What is powergaming?:Performing actions that dictate how they are responded to, not leaving a player any choice and essentially responding for them. This can also be done by making it so your character is performing unimaginable feats, because the player oocly does not want to lose.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Savati'Nox

 

Character’s gender: Female

 

Character’s race: Kha'Pantera

 

Character’s age:44

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): 

     Ever since she was unpredictably born at sea, Savati'Nox took to being out on water like a bird flies. However, one day in the midst of war horror between Kha and dwarves, a lone dwarf sunk her ship. she was stranded out at sea, unable to swim for the countless hours. Finally she began to sink to the bottom of the sea, the moon at night shining at her from the sky. A boat passed over her, blocking the moon, she felt numb and was beginning to fade.  A black figure plunged into the depths after her, swimming powerfully, her vision blurred, it brought her to the surface. 

     Waking up from a haze of terrible feelings, Savati'Nox looked around and realized she was in a ship cabin. Someone was coming up from the stairwell, it was a kha, thankfully. Mumbling, and beginning to notice her surroundings more vividly, the Kha came up to her. "Sa'Vi, Radone'Zar must ask, are you alright?" his red and amber eyes shone with care, feeling frazzled she answered "Yes". On open sea, he described over three days adventures, and Savati'Nox began to recover. "When i saw the dwarf fire at the boat i knew something hawd gown amis, eet took me a while to find you, I'm glad i did find yow." he glanced at her, and she answered again, beginning to like this Kha, "Savati'Nox is glad yow found me".

     The day she was to have cubs, two as predicted, the first was Shadow'Zar, when he was born all the fire in the torches went out, so they named his Shadow'Zar. Next came the female cub, Nearly dawn, it began to get windy and the breeze seemed to whisper "Jay", and so ironically a feather of a Blue'Jay floated in. Radone'Zar decided to name her Jay'Zar. After the trials of maturity, the great war had nearly ceased, but when Radone'Zar went hunting, a battle hungry- still enraged at the war, slaughtered him.

Ambitions: To protect her children, and once more provide for them, sometimes it is all she does, putting herself in danger

 

Strengths/Talents: She is a skilled Fisherwoman and enjoys when she can catch an especially rare fish. 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: She can be lazy when it comes to doing things that do not interest her, she is naturally rebellious and sometimes over protective

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): A jet black Kha'Pantera who is not fading in color due to old age, her eyes are a misty grey that constantly change from green to blue misty. She is 5 feet 6 inches and is 120 pounds, she wears blood red clothing.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

Edited December 18, 2015 by Brockling
Photo for skin

[JEEGK 1367]

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[JEEGK 1367]

 

Hello Applicant, your application has been denied for the following reasons, please seek to adjust and fix these problems so that you may become successful in your next apply:

 

-Your definitions were plagiarized which is not acceptable, I will give you one warning, after this, I will have to revoke your attempts at applying.

 

-Please provide a picture with your skin.

 

If you have any questions, feel free to message me via forums, or WS chat in-game!

 

 

 

 

 

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