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[brosum7 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Brosum7

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): I'm aware.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Cyber bullying is strictly prohibited, and will not be condoned in any shape or form. If you promote, or take part in cyber bullying amongst the community, you will be punished just as severely.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): I don't have any questions.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? My friend and I, that came from another RP community, thought Minecraft RP would be something fun to try. I went to google, and this is the first active one with more than five people.

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Playing a character in a fantasy world.

What is metagaming?: Using OOC knowledge in IC situations.

What is powergaming?:Giving your character power they don't have. Making you character do things that are impossible or unrealistic.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Dante

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Dante is a highlander that grew up in a Raevir. He was an only child, living with his father. His father was a hunter, and started taking Dante hunting with him at a very young age. His father was very good at setting traps, but Dante could hit his prey with an arrow if it someone escaped his dad's trap.  Dante began going hunting alone at the age of eleven, bringing home food for him and his dad. It was still nothing compared to the amount of food his father would catch with traps, but it was impressive for his age. When he turned twelve, his name was becoming known in his town for being a great archer, and he only got better the more days that passed.

By the time he was thirteen, he was a full fledged hunter. Dante and his dad would catch far more food than they needed each day, so his father would go around giving it away to some people who were struggling when it came to catching food. Eventually, the people would be less thankful for the food they were receiving, and began to expect it. They began to feel they were entitled to the free food they were being given. This got especially hard for Dante when his dad got sick. His father was a much better hunter, so it was hard feeding all those people by himself. He would be doing his and his dad's work each day, to keep everyone happy. It was a heavy workload, but he would always put in the extra mile, and do more work than he thought he could.

His dad's sickness wasn't getting better. He didn't do much other than lay in bed until Dante was fifteen, when he finally passed away. Dante was heartbroken. His dad was his best friend, and one of the only people he would actually spend time to talk to. The citizens in his town began to get angry with Dante, because he wasn't providing any food. He just wasn't in a state to provide for all this people, so he decided he would run away. He would pack nothing more than his bow, some arrows, and a picture of his dad. He then set off to go and explore the world, never looking back to his hometown. He started a new life.

 

Personality Traits: Friendly and giving, but also pretty quiet. Doesn't take time to get to know people.

Ambitions: To be as good of a hunter as his dad.

Strengths/Talents: Archery, hunting, giving.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Bad with directions, kind of an airhead. Not very knowledgeable of what goes on outside of his homeland.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Height - 5'11" 

Weight - 150 lbs

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[img=http://i.imgur.com/J5lyNe1.png?1]

 

I might of accidentally made two applications, but I'm pretty sure I deleted my first one. Sorry if I uploaded two.

[James 425]

Your application is

You are not allowed to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• All of your definitions need to be expanded upon.
• Clarify on your powergaming definition
• Expand and create more server lore within your biography. Server lore can be found here http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

[James 425]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.