[Denied] [Pending]Nirdinth's App

[Nirdinth 0]

IGN:Nirdinth

Age IRL:13

Yes,I am aware of this

I agree to the rules and the rule I am most fond of is the anti-trolling roll

I am not confused on any of the rules

I searched up Fantasy Roleplay Servers for Minecraft on Google

Roleplaying is being something you cant be irl and living there life and making there choices

Metagaming is much like god modding but instead of immortality it's one hit kills every time

Power Gaming is basically have the best luck ever and always win

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Name: Ivellios Galanodell

Sex: Male

Race: High Elf

Age: 20

Bio: A novice alchemist by the name of Ivellios who was born and raised in Halun'or trained by his mother and father to know the basics of alchemy. After they felt he knew enough they decided to let him have fun making potions and testing them.     Later Ivellios came home to see his family dead and a strange gas in the air, he knew that a deadly poison has been spread through the house killing his family. After that he decided to take what he had and go to Vailor to become a true alchemist and not make small liquids. 

Personality Traits: Shy,Intelligent,Wise,Peaceful

Ambitions:To become one of the best alchemists ever known

Strengths/Talents:Can make BASIC potions as if it was cooking steak

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Can't fight hand to hand or with any weapon

He's about 6' and 145 lbs (About the healthy weight and height for his age maybe a bit shorter) With blue eyes and dirty blonde hair

 

 

 

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What this simply means is; your application is good! Do not fret, however, in order for this application to be accepted there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. Do not make a new app, simply use the 'Edit' button at the bottom of your application.

-Expand upon your biography.

-Your metagaming definition is incorrect.

-Your powergaming and roleplaying definitions are both only partially correct.

(Alchemy is amazing)

 

If you want help of need me to review your app again once you have made the necessary changes. Please visit my profile and send me a Private Message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

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Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

Applicant has failed to make the required changes in time.

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

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