[Denied] vector113's application

[vector113 0]

 

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:_vector

How old are you?:13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:no cyber bullying

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

 through youtube and friends

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:roleplaying is where you play as a character and you make certain choices as that character.and those choices affect that character

What is metagaming?:metagaming is when you mix ooc with ic(out of character with in-character.for example i chat with my buddies and i give them my location/coordinates that would be metagaming.

What is power gaming?:powergaming is when a person's character goes to a certain limit that forces and other players character to make a choice. when the player has no time to react and it makes roleplaying no longer fun.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:victor bloodgem

Character’s sex:male

Character’s race:human

Character’s age:23

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):Victor was born in a village that was caught in the cross fire of war.a couple of years later at the age 16 he moved to a great village. he also learnt the art of stealth and became a great assassin. one day Victor went into the forest and got ambushed by bandits and almost died. so he went into hiding 7 years later he came out of hiding and became an assassin again.

Personality Traits:fearless,swift,athletic,silent type,

Ambitions:to become the greatest assassin in the land.

Strengths/Talents:good at running,good at hiding,good with a bow,

Weaknesses/Inabilities:not good at swimming,not good at staying on task,

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

 

 

 

[Crowbill 493]

Unfortunately, you have been denied for following reasons:

• Your current story seems like a cliche (the whole burned village thing and becoming an assassin). Please work on you biography a bit more.
• Could you please add more lore into your application? Feel free to use our wiki about our current Realm Vailor for more info! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor
• Please add more to your ambitions.
• Your strengths and weaknesses are not even. Please add more to them.
• Could you please add your skin?

Fear not, as you may re-apply in 24 hours. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

[Crowbill 493]

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