[Denied] application form

[cranedig 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: cranedig

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13: Yes, i'm well aware.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes and i agree

Definitions

What is roleplaying?:it is the roleplay of you being a different character and experiancing a differnet life.

 

What is metagaming?: it is the knowing what another players going to do in advance.

 

IC Info

Character’s name: crane assassin

Character's sex: male

 

Character’s age:looks 25 human years old,but 40 years in elf

 

Character’s race: elf

 

Biography:cranes back story

i was a prince and my mother died at the age of 25 when i was 2 years of age.i dont really remember her but my father was a king when she past my dad ran off into the woods the assassins that killed my mother and father took me in and trained me until i was 25 years of age and sent me off into the world.after 2 years i found out i was a prince.ever since i found out i have been looking for them.

 

Ambitions:trying to find assassins and kill them and take my throne back.

Weaknesses/Inabilities:no weaknesses,

minecraft skin.

 

 

 

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Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

-Crane assassin is not a proper name, please choose a more RP appropriate name.

-Please fill out the entire application.

-Your metagaming and roleplaying definitions are wrong.

-You can't be 25 human years but 40 in elf.

-You must expand and use server lore in your biography.

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

(Ignore: Japples)

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