[Denied] application form

[cranedig 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: cranedig

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13: Yes, i'm well aware.

Definitions

What is roleplaying?:the acting of a person in a story.

What is metagaming:uses external factors to affect the game.

Character’s age:25

 

Character’s race: elf

 

Biography:cranes back story

i was the son of the first god, i was sent down to stop wars and help the world.i was born as the son of a merchant and lived my life as a elf and nobody knew not even my father. i was sent down to for my true father god to test my strength and rule the realm and know body knew,even the lore of the world never did say that i was born and one day going to rule the land. a few years later after i was born my father died and i trained for many years to be a assassin to find the person who killed him.

Strengths/Talents:assassinations,killing,thats all.

Weaknesses/Inabilities:no weaknesses

 

 

[rathat 868]

-You have been denied for the following reasons-

 

You did not use the proper format, which can be found here-

 

 
Your definitions are Plagiarized. This is your first warning. 
Your Metagaming and Roleplaying definitions are incorrect
Your characters skin is fairly modern and does not fit that of any elf

Your bio contains little to no server lore

Your bio must be 2 decent paragraphs long
 Everyone has a weakness

Your character is completely overpowered and unbelievable 

-you may reapply in 24 hours-

[rathat 868]

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