[Denied] XxM7MDxBandarxX's application

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:XxM7MDxBandarxX

How old are you?:12

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:the combat rules

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:gizzy gazza

What is roleplaying?:the acting out or performance of a particular role

What is metagaming?:Metagaming is to use information outside of what the character knows and uses it to gain the upper hand in role-play.

What is powergaming?:Powergaming is to act without giving the other person who we are role-playing with no chance to react.

Character’s name:Mohammed

Character’s sex:male

Character’s race:high human

Character’s age:31

that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history: his name is mohammed alqhtani  Mohammed was born in 1517, after a year, his family has to move out from Oren to avoid getting hurt in "The Dukes' War" in5118. In 1520, he and his family returned to Oren after the Loyalists of Oren stood triumphant. His family and the rest of the citizens of Oren was put in distress to hear about the death of the Emperor in 1523, and Guy de Bar became the new Orenian Emperor. Plague was spread throughout Vailor in 1526, and Guy de Bar was assassinated, and this caused the citizens of Oren to be put in distress once more. John Fredrick Horen became the new Orenian Emperor. Mohammed moved out of Oren when he was 25, and during his journey he heard about the siege of Urguan by Oren and was pleased by it. Now, Mohammed travelled around Vailor.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):it says i cant have more than 2k but i did put the photo in my last app

Personality Traits:his frindley and he gets angry from the stupidist things

Ambitions:becoming a master at magic and hand fighting

Strengths/Talents:his a master at close  and archery

Weaknesses/Inabilities:fire and suprise attack

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Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

-High human is not a race.

-Please expand on your bio a bit more, what makes your character unique?

-Please change your name from Mohammed. It sounds very similar to a religious figure within the muslim religion.

-Put some out of combat weaknesses and strengths, not everything is based on combat.

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

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