[Denied] Hello this is my entrey

[DragonSavior 1]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: DragonSavior

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: no hacking

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Gizzy gazza

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Acting but you like having a secont life

What is metagaming?: no idea

What is powergaming?:no idea

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Richard

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race:Human

Character’s age:19

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): I dont remember much but what i do is well fire a face and nightmares ever sense then you wood think that i wood be crazy but luky im still "me" good days and bad bad days pain and gain (good at role play)

Personality Traits: happy shy vengfull

Ambitions: vengens

Strengths/Talents: kean eyes fast strong kean hearing

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Range bad balaencs

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): long black hare red eyes 6ft 230pounds. 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

 

Edited February 22, 2016 by DragonSavior
Making sure that it is in tip top shape

[NicktheRed20 215]

--- Denied ---

 

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

 

-Your Roleplaying, Metagaming, and Powergaming definitions are wrong.

Here is a link to help you with them. Though make sure to put them in your own words:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying

 

-Your biography is very short and has no server lore. I suggest adding some:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

 

-Please give your character more traits

 

-Please give your character a better goal in life

 

-Please give your character a better weakness
 

-Please find a skin that better suits your character as well as the lore and timeline of the server

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

[NicktheRed20 215]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.