[Denied] Re-Application (ZXYGames)

[ZXYGames_Herlo 0]

Hello i would like to re-apply 4 whitelist

 

my errors are

-Your skin is not RP appropriate.

-You must fill out the entire application.

-Your character is incredibly overpowered. He can not simply have increased regeneration.

-You can not make a character under 18.

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial

i have made sure it has been 24 hours CHECK

 

no regen kay then no regen. CHECK

 

roleplay apropriate skin? CHECK youl see..

 

Over 18? 19!! CHECK

 

now to fill out my entire app

Character’s name: Herlo

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 19

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 

Born in Felsen a week early.. he struggles to learn to speak and walk but he does it bravely

but slow... at the age of 5 his father started learning swords skills without physical muscle he learned to

learned to jump half his height

 

then one day he got home (Felsen)  from training and all he saw was his mother's necklace

from there on out his goal was to find his parents and get revenge on whoever 

did this to them

 

(here on out the bio was edited after i posted it)

 

he has gone months alone and all he feels is hate and loneliness

Little does he know he is about to be changed in ways

no man has ever been before. he is currently asleep against a tree with a 

fire in the middle of Hollow-vale Mercenaries 

 

To be continued...

 

 

 

Personality Traits: Calm, Kind, Gentle, Brave, Strong

Ambitions: Find Parents, 

Strengths/Talents: Intelligent  Sword Skills agility

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Cant Swim, 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 5 feet 2 Brown eyes short curly brown hair

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):does this work? http://bit.ly/1mTyOCd

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:ZXYGames

How old are you?:9

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:No memes 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no thanks 4 asking x3

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Via GizzyGazza a minecraft youtuber who was previously on your server

 

I hope i get in this time

 

-ZXYRoleplays ;)

 

 

 

Edited February 22, 2016 by ZXYGames_Herlo
Staff told me i needed to use more specific locations in my bio

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Under review.

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Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

-You must post the entire application.

-You must expand upon your biography.

-You do not have the definitions on there.

-Please use more grammar.

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

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