[Denied] Application

[J8117 0]

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:J8117

How old are you?:13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:If  your character dies in the roleplay, you have a week or two to reclaim it before it disappears 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):The rules on breaking into chest

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?Through YouTube

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:Acting on a game

What is metagaming?:Another universe inside of a game

What is powergaming?:A style for a roleplay/game

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:"J8117"

Character’s sex:Male

Character’s race:Human

Character’s age:19

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): After teaming up with his brother, they decide to conquer the world together. After invading a certainly strong village J8117's brother said, "I bet I could have taken on that hole city by myself." J8117 disagreed. "We agreed we would not take all the credit for ourselves." He said.

 

"If you are not going to bow down to your leader then FIGHT ME!" J8117 picked up his sword and slashed it across his brother's chest. "You lose..." He said teasingly as his enemy slunk to the ground dead. "This world is mine now..."

 

 

Personality Traits:Hot temper, Strong Willed, Evil

Ambitions:Rule the world

Strengths/Talents:Archery, Redstone

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Close combat PVP

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):Weight:108lbs, Height:6.3ft

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

 

Edited February 28, 2016 by J8117
Forgot to answer some questions

[Chamosial 379]

 

This application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

• All of your definitions are incorrect. Please fix these. Look at the links below for some help but remember to put them into your own words.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Powergaming

 

• 'J8117' is not a suitable character name. Think more along the lines of an actual name for a person when coming up with the name for your character.

 

• Your biography is far too short. Please expand it and make it the size of two decent paragraphs.

 

• Your biography contains no server lore. Please add some in. Look at the link below for some help with this.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

 

• You can have 'evil' as a personality trait but you would need to explain why your character is evil in your biography. What happened to make them this way? Generally speaking as well, there is no character that is just flat out evil.

 

• Please think of a better ambition than to 'rule the world'. It's very cliche.

 

• Add some more strengths and weaknesses that are roleplay based. 

 

• I'm not really sure what your skin is, especially the clothing that is being worn. I would suggest changing or altering it to look more like your character would in the in-game year of 1548.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to PM me or another AT member.

[Chamosial 379]

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