[Denied] Application

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: XxscrubreckerxX

How old are you?:

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): 10

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes i have

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No toxic or excplicit behaviour

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): N/A

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: My friend

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?:When you assume the role of a character of there life and events

What is metagaming?: use ooc info in rp

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: *Cuts off head with one slice Thats power gameing

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Leo Nitris

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 27

Biography  Leo Nitris was Born in Felsen oren IN 1520 Post civil war When he was 7 His Cottage was Burnt down By dwarves aswell as killing his entire family For 3 years he had to survive from what he found in the Savana

it was a very hard for him but he was found and has been seeking/plotting for revenge ever since he has been making weapons from scrap metal that he finds he has come across a team that will help him and has been learning the art of blacksmithing his Dad was a Guard  Leo always wanted to learn magic although he couldent find anyone to teach him he is still on a journey to find a mage to teach him Leo is A freedom fighter and will kill anyone in his path to find and destroy the dwarven race his team is willing to help him on his quest for vengence

The Dwarfs unable to realize there actions dont really care Leo is very angry about this as a freedom fighter he cant stand waiting and hopes his group will train/help him with this and cannot not wait to take down the pack of dwarfs that killed his family once and for all. Leo has also always had a very strong dislike for orcs and elves but likes them way more then dwarfs but knows to be nice to other humans and always to fellow travelers he has also always been a trouble maker and gets into fights with other races.

Personality Traits: Humourus Determined annoying

Ambitions: Wizard

Strengths/Talents: Black smithing

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Swimming (Can swim but not very well) cant stand cold weathers

Appearance: Brown hair black eyes Blue suit Wears dusty clothes

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

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Denied.

Heya! Your app has been denied for the following reasons:

Copying two of your definitions from other sources. Please write your definitions in your own words.

You are able to reapply in 24 hours, though here's some other things you will need to change to be accepted:

-Your characters backstory is too cliche, meaning that a lot of people have used this story before. Try to come up with a more original story.

-You need to put more detail into your character's strengths and weaknesses, at least 2-3 detailed sentences.

Thank you!

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