[Denied] _CherryBlossem_'s Whitelist Application

[_CherryBlossem_ 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: _CherryBlossem_

How old are you?: Eleven.

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, I am aware of this.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Honestly, I agree with all of the rules. The rules are set up in a way that's it's fair to everyone. I personally think that's a wonderful way to set the rules up.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): N/A

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A recommendation from my sister, also know as Anurkian

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): N/A

What is roleplaying?: To act and speak as if you are the character you're portraying.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is and out of character action where a players character uses knowledge that the player is aware of but the character is not meant to know.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Forcing an action against another player. For Ex: *Raina would slice the man in half instantly, then taking his money and running away*

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Aaliyah

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Female

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Human

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) Nineteen

Biography: (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Aaliyah is from a distant village hidden in the mountains. She was born in 1528 May 3rd. She's never ventured outside of her village so she isn't comfortable around most people. Aaliyah grew up with her mother, father, and older brother. Her mother passed away due to unknown causes when she was young so she doesn't know much about her. The only times Aaliyah has seen her mother in through a poorly drawn picture of her and faded memories. Aaliyah wanted to follow in her mothers footsteps so she had come to the conclusion that she'd become a florist just like her mother was. She studied for many long hard years giving up most of her education just for the sake of becoming a florist. When Aaliyah turned seventeen she decided her to say her farewells and go out into the wilderness to broaden her expertise in gardening. She studied the wild flowers and observed the plants around her for two year before she was convinced that she had studied hard enough to conclude her studies and start making her dream a reality. Aaliyah wandered for a couple of months until she arrived at the city called Sulvus and is trying to make her dreams come true there.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) When it comes to flowers Aaliyah falls into her own little world. She loves flowers and she can't stand bugs and anything bitter.   Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) She desires to be a florist.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Aaliyah is good at gardening, cooking, and sewing . These are her three talents.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) She is very weak when it comes to combat and she cannot handle emotional situations.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Aaliyah has long brown hair with light green eyes. She's stands at 5,5                                                                                            Skin:

[jamesb 218]

 

 

Your application has been put on [DENIED]

 

Unfortunately, this application has too many errors to accept. You are welcome to reapply in 24 hours. Reapplying sooner will result in denial. If you have any questions or concerns, please visit my forums profile, and send me a Private Message.

 

This application was denied for the following reasons,

 

- Some of your definitions are plagiarized. Feel free to visit the LotC wiki HERE for the definitions, but please use your own words. If you plagiarize again, you will be banned from applying  for a week.

- Months such as "may" do not exist on LotC. If you'd like to see how the LotC calendar works, please visit HERE.

- The current year on LotC is 1552. If your character was born in 1528, she would be 24.

- Your biography lacks server lore. Again, feel free to visit the wiki to find some lore!

Good luck on your next application!

[jamesb 218]

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