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What’s your Minecraft account name?:Alteremean3582

How old are you?:10

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes I am aware.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes I agree to the rules.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree that you should have a first offense warming in the Community Conduct.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): I do not have any misunderstanding of the rules.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I found out about lord of the craft because I looked on youtube for a Lord of The Rings server and The Lord of The Craft looked very fun.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?:Roleplay is when you pretend to be someone you are not. You take on a persons behavior and life quest.

What is metagaming?:Metagaming is going against a certain rule set to optimize your players game.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:Power gaming is when you try to make the most out of your gaming experience with out using story telling or other actions. It is also going against other players in a unorthodox way.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Morkor Handshield

Character’s sex: (male or female?)Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Mountain Dwarf

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 61

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)I am Morker Handshield and I am from Gabilgathol (Belegost). I was born in 1955. In 1969 I traveled all across Middle-Earth. I had 2 brothers named Honynute and Monjuno and no sisters. When I was growing up my father was in the Dwarves army and fought in many battles and when I was little I wanted to be a soldier for the Dwarves.

         When I was 23 I started training to be a blacksmith. But then quit to try and continue to live my life. After I was 34 I started building a home for myself it took about 6 months to finish my home. 20 years later I was retired from my job of being a merchant . I now live in my house right outside the boundaries of Gabilgathol (Belegost).World lore, Magic Lore, and Creature lore.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)Every morning my character walks around the village looking whats on sale at the market. My character likes to train a lot for battles. My character dislikes when people lie to him.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) My character hopes to be a great warrior for the dwarves army.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) My character is really good at defending his village.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) My character needs to improve staying on task.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) My character has brown eyes, he has a brown beard and he is 4 feet 10 inches. He also has brown hair.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)file:///Users/roselimongellihome/Desktop/2016-04-01_15.33.32.jpg

 

 

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[jamesb 218]

 

[jamesb 218]

 

Your application has been put on [DENIED]

 

Unfortunately, this application has too many errors to accept. You are welcome to reapply in 24 hours. Reapplying sooner will result in denial. If you have any questions or concerns, please visit my forums profile, and send me a Private Message.

 

This application was denied for the following reasons,

 

- Both your metagaming and power gaming definitions are incorrect. Feel free to visit HERE for help with the power gaming definition, and HERE for help with the metagaming definition. Be sure to use your own words!

 

- Dates on LotC do not work the same as they do in the real-world. The current year on LotC is 1553. If Morkor is 61, he would have been born in 1492. For more information on LotC's calendar, visit HERE.

 

- Your biography is lacking. Please add server lore, and ensure it includes a decent two paragraphs that portray your characters life well. If you're having trouble finding lore, you may go to LotC's wiki HERE.

 

- Please expand upon your strengths. Try adding non-combat things. Is your character a good liar? Is he funny? 

 

- Please expand upon your weaknesses. Aim for two or three!

 

- Your skin did not properly upload. Visit HERE for help on uploading your skin.

Good luck on your next application!

[jamesb 218]

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