[Denied] Tryouts lol

[P1ss_Jugg 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: P1ss_Jugg

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes I am Aware

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No Grief

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): The Skin thing because some can't change their Skin

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Long story

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: It like when you pretend to be a Part of a world and sorta act it out basically

What is metagaming?: I think its like when your rp and you say their name with out them verbally telling you?

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:From what I have Read online its like when you don't give the person a chance to rp or react to something I think?

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Jennie GreenLeaf

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Female

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Dark Elf (since I can't change my skin)

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 300 years old

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)My name is Jennie Greenleaf I was born in Celestine.I lived there until the Undead conquered us as they headed North.I had left the Town to Haelun'or where I stayed for many years and still do.The world is a cruel place so I decided to try to become an Archer in the Cities Military.My Parents died when the Undead came so I was left fending for myself.I had came to town where my friend had been hiding.So we decided to join the Archers.Later on while we were waiting our turn he turned and became a traitor and is now in another city unknown his name is but so the name will be known.(i copied from my other app so I would leave anything out)

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Reading Archery and Spying

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)The best Archer Ever

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Archery and Spying

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Up Close fighting like really close

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Red Hair Short so It is Easier to fight

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

 

[jamesb 218]

 

Your application has been put on [DENIED]

 

Unfortunately, this application has too many errors to accept. You are welcome to reapply in 24 hours. Reapplying sooner will result in denial. If you have any questions or concerns, please visit my forums profile, and send me a Private Message.

 

- You have failed to wait 24 hours before reapplying. Doing this again will result in a ban from applying! You'll be given a warning for this.

 

- Your metagaming definition is close. That would be an example of metagaming. Though, alas, your definition is still considered incorrect. Please visit HERE for help with your definition.

 

- Again, close, but still incorrect. I recommend going HERE for help with your power gaming definition.

 

- I really like the beginning of your biography! But the rest needs to be fleshed out. You've included enough lore, but your biography needs to be a decent two paragraphs long. Perhaps expand upon the following things: what was Jennie's friend's name? Did Jennie have any siblings? Did Jennie succeed in becoming an archer? What did she do in Haelun'or, with her spare time?

 

- Please think of a more creative ambition. Does Jennie dream to leave Haelun'or one day, and do something else with her life? Become a merchant? Start a guild?

 

- Please expand upon Jennie's personality traits, strengths, and weaknesses. Try to think of some less combat based ones. Aim for two or three specific answers for each category.

 

This application was denied for the following reasons,

 

Good luck on your next application!

 

[jamesb 218]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.