[Denied] [Pending] FrontierFarmer application

[FrontierFarmer 0]

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: 54eKingLeonidas

How old are you?:17

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Impersonation of a Player or Staff Member as it's not nice if one actually thinks that it is it

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I wanted to play a rpg server and found this accidentally (my luck was good)

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: you see the world with the character you have created.

What is metagaming?: You use information received outside roleplay for your roleplay.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: You do something you're not able to do really like saying the enemy is bleeding heavily after you punch him in a toe

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Mahummed

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) FarFolk

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)25

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)

 

Mahummed born outside the city of Al-Wakrah. His family were farmers and he lived his life in the farm. His father Ahmud died while trying to go sell crops to the city of Al-Wakrah. Mahummed was sad about it and became religious. A follower of Allah. The events leading to his fathers death was unknown and he thought it had to be involved with raiders. At the same time a traveling merchant visited family's farm and Mahummed heard stories about humen leaving "Athera" and finding the Isles of Vailor. The merchant was a dwarf and the best story Mahummed heard from him was about a battle between Shreck'Lak's warband and their enemies. It was said to be a brutal fight and after the fight a volcano erupted leaving the Vailor without sun for a year. It seemed like Mahummed's fathers story about a year without sun was true. His mom, a stylish woman named Elena was from the Holy Orenian Empire and left the Empire after losing her money in a gamble. She then met Mahummed's father in Al-Wakrah where she was looking for a job. Because of this Mahummed was curious about the Isles and wanted to see the Holy Orenian Empire at least once. He had heard that there were exotic animals such as sheeps.

 

Mahummed, now 18 inherited family's farm and wanted to produce the best crops The Empire of Vanderguan offered. After working hard for so many years, he felt that he might never see his dreams come true. He started to see his friends too often and his farm decayed. His mother wasn't happy and gave him the lesson he never forgets. After this he wasn't mad at his mother as he saw what he had done. Two months later he woke up to strange noices and saw thieves. He drove them away, but saw that her mother was dead. After crying for an hour, he started to smell something burning. The farm was on fire. "Was this a dream?", he thought. Everything he loved in the now Kingdom of Vandoria was gone. He had no option but to leave the Kingdom and his friends. His path lead to north, seeing many different biomes until he stumbled to a rock. After getting up, he saw something familiar. It was the Istria her mother had talked about a lot. Feeling that this place might be perfect he went forward. Even though the Istria was far away still, he had strenght now. His future is in front.

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) He dislikes living in cities . He dislikes being around Orcs. He feels safe near military.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) He wants to build a farm on the frontier as maybe enemies won't kill everyone there.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) He is very good at farming and archery. He is brave against anything which is dangerous for his home and country

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) He is not so good at fishing and his close combat skill is awful. He is kinda like a militia if recruited to army. He tends to run away if conscripted to attack enemy nations.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) He has brown hair, dark skin, not so high only 1.7 m exactly. He hasn't any scars. He looks like arabic if he was in the real world.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

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Spoiler

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Your application has been put on [PENDING]

 

What this simply means is; your application is good! Do not fret, however, in order for this application to be accepted there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. Do not make a new app, simply use the 'Edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

-Your Roleplaying and Metagaming definitions are lacking

 

-Please give your character a better name

 

-Please make sure your biography is a decent two paragraphs long

 

-Saying that your character doesn't like living close to humans, but enjoys living next to the military doesn't make sense

 

-Your skin seems to fit more of a girl persona -- please find a skin that better suits your character. 

 

 

If you want help of need me to review your app again once you have made the necessary changes. Please visit my profile and send me a Private Message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

 

 

Denied

 

-Failed to make the necessary corrections within 24 hours.

 

You may reapply in 12 hours

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