[Denied] Artem0_0

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Out-Of-Character Information

What’s your Minecraft account name?:  mrPlayMine

How old are you?:  13.

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):  Yes.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:  I have readed and agreed with rules. 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:  You must remain In-Character at all times when in-game. If you need to speak out of character, do so in private messages (via /t <playername>) or local OOC chat (via starting your message with "((")

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):  No. I have played RP server already.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I wanted to find normal Minecraft RP server. Its all.

 

 

 

Definitions

 

 

What is roleplaying?: Its when you played your role in game like in real life.

What is metagaming?: Its when you sayed your friend in Skype, Facebook, but dont saying it in the game.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: When you thinking, what your character is very powerful.

 

In-Character Information
 

Character’s name: Artem Kalmykov

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: Humans

Character’s age: 15

Biography: Artem was born in Felsen, 1539. He didn't saw wars and death. Artem lived in normal family, with no bandits in family or thiefs. In one day he saw, how him parents was arrested by guardians. They died in jail with rats. Guardians forgot Artem, and he escaped. With no family he became a thief. Shops didnt knew about thief, who stealed a lot of food. When he heared about orc, he didnt wanted to travel to the others cities and lived to 13 there. In 13 he was declassified. Kalmykov stealed a small boat and traveled to the Dwarvs. Small family priuce him. At 14 he traveled to another cities.

 

But there was a problem - he havent got a map. He was caught by Orcs, but was saved by him friend - Alex. Alex was a good man - stupid, but kind. Alex was chasing on the heels of Artem and wanted to run away with him. When they came to the Cloud Temple, Alex was killed by his enemy - Oleg. Oleg was a dwarf, and he lived in rich family. Artem ran away, because he didn't know how to handle the weapons. After 2 years he came back with a terrible revenge, all revenge, not even his oppressors, but simply those who hurt flawed.

Personality Traits: No habits; likes animals. Also he loving swim. Dislike blood and guardians.

Ambitions: He wanted to be a pro thief, and a legendary hero.

Strengths/Talents: Good thief and spy.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Good in stealth, bad in combat.

Appearance: 16-year-old man at the dawn of forces. Blue eyes. Scar on the leg and eye. 170 meters tall. Black hairs.

Skin:

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Denied.

 

-Your entire application is poorly written, and strewn with typos and errors.

 

-All 3 of your definitions appear incorrect, and dont really make sense.

 

-The minimum age for a character you can apply as is 18.

 

-Your character's biography is incoherent, and hard to understand.

 

-You need to expand upon your character's strengths and weaknesses

 

-Your character's age is inconsistent in your application. Your biography ends with him 16, yet your official age listed is 15, yet it is put at 16 again when describing his appearance.

 

-You listed his height at 170 meters... Clearly this is a mistype.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a Pm is you have any questions.

 

 

 

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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