[Denied] Gentleman240's application

[gentleman240 3]

name?:gentleman240
How old are you?:18
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Cyber bullying and rules that stated no stating knowledge your character shouldn't know
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):No
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was wondering the servers looking for an rp server and i happily found this one
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):Yes 

 

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Spark
Character’s sex: (male or female?)Male
Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)Dwarf
Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 28 years old
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) I was born in a small cottage in 1494 when my family came over in a boat and settled in Krinfird where my parents were excellent blacksmiths from them I picked up some skills but I was a digger and that is what I did when The Ducal Coalition came to declare war.My father and I worked are hands to the bones mining ore and crafting armor for the king but eventually the war came to a crushing end and it hurts to say the war took a toll on my father he could no longer work and to him this meant he had no use for his life so whatever life he had left he spent on are little cottage eyes glued to the beautiful blue sky's while i worked the forge my arms slowly becoming stronger then an ox's but my touch gentle in nature. My mother died shortly after my father in 1530 by then I was 36 years old and decided to travel the land and leave the place I only knew as home.
 My journeys took to many places but only a few settlements stood out to me. Salvus was a beautiful place close to the sea but i did not find it comforting no places to make a mine the stone was soft from all the water and any mine i set up would start to collapse it twas a shame a met a beautiful maiden who I loved but we were not meant to be so I set off. As i started heading east i eventually made it to courland a mountain city. Courland was my kind of town it had huge mountains and beautiful forests. This is where i decided to make a home and a forge to pass on my forging skills and maybe one day become the people's hero someone they can look up too....someone who can defend everyone even if it means my own life but this is all the ideals of a simple Smith who's ambitions may won day kill him...only time can tell the story now.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)Spark is a spontaneous and energized miner who digging and building castles.

Habits: Helping the needy even if it means it causes self harm, spark cannot walk past anyone in pain.

Likes: Mining large areas building houses and forging armor also helping the needy

Dislikes: War it took his father's life and passion away from him but he knows his way around a sword but only how to make one.
Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)One day to become the people's hero and own a huge forging factory.
 

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Spark is a good builder miner and is very good at solving problems.
 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) He's unable to kill others unless threatened and believes all life is sacred, fighting is not his strong point and is one of his great weaknesses.
 

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)Spark is 3 feet and 11 inches with black leather armor and a head band. No visible scars or wounds.
 

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)The skin was made by Krosan101 on Skin index all credit goes to him. He did not have any plagiarism notices on the skin but I'm still giving him credit and again I say THIS SKIN WAS MADE BY Krosan101(It is not allowing me to upload a screen shot so I'll add it)

Edited April 18, 2016 by Readicti
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[Readicti 902]

Unfortunately you are being denied. Please look at the bellow critique and make the necessary changes. You may re-apply in 6 hours. If you have any questions or concerns, please message me.

• You need to include definitions in your new application.
• Your skin, although appropriate for a dwarf, is just a recolored Honeydew skin. Please change it.

[Readicti 902]

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